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我是易真,是香港浸會大學創意及專業寫作系的畢業生,喜歡詩詞和古典文化,已在 IG 發文了一段時間。平時寫的文章會先在那邊貼出,歡迎大家支持!8964 copyright protection552PENANAeOKM5EylGP 維尼
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文章方向:詩詞、歌詞賞析、影評556Please respect copyright.PENANAYocWs3etyK
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易真《更漏子・無題》556Please respect copyright.PENANAXGcR9mrb6g
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眩光暈,夕陽照。羞煞檀郎誰笑?妝未褪,攬詩書。累愁枕夢虛。8964 copyright protection552PENANAVLwQT2SDDJ 維尼
鈴聲起,惆悵始。偏記叮噹玉珥。欲對語,更無因。還歸濯俗塵。8964 copyright protection552PENANAkNKXhB8yv4 維尼
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- 眩光:刺眼的光。這裏指電子產品螢幕發出的光。
- 檀郎:晉潘岳小字檀奴,因其容貌美好,風度瀟灑,為當時眾多婦女心儀的對象,後世遂以「檀郎」做為婦女對夫婿或所喜歡的人之美稱。
- 妝未褪:有二解 - 1. 未卸妝 2. 妝容還未褪掉
- 鈴聲:手機鈴聲。
- 叮噹:狀聲詞。形容金、石、玉器等互相碰擊的聲音。 *環佩叮噹:形容女子走路的時候身上所佩帶的飾物所發出的聲音,清脆悅耳。
- 珥:用珠玉作成的耳環。粵音:nei6(膩);普音:ěr
- 濯:洗。粵音:zok6(鑿);普音:zhuó
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【寫詞・人生】8964 copyright protection552PENANAPvtjaXxaGp 維尼
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上星期下班回家,晚飯後,還未更衣、卸妝,便拿出詞集看,竟累到伏案而睡,忘記了曾作甚麼夢。8964 copyright protection552PENANAC3cWye9N7c 維尼
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上班總要對着電腦,很容易感到頭暈目眩,想到人生還有幾十年的上班日子,加上社會的政治、疫情等社會問題,總覺得心很累,便常看書、寫作、閒逛,聊以解愁。8964 copyright protection552PENANAy01mjzbsql 維尼
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寫作亦需長期看著螢幕,卻與上班時對著電腦螢幕的心情截而不同,亦可適時作出休息。我經常在作夢,若可吸風飲露(笑),便可只做兼職,其餘時間均可自由使用,豈不快樂?8964 copyright protection552PENANAKDijxdo8tX 維尼
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上星期首次穿着古裝,外出拍照,感到很興奮。烈日當空,需撐傘遮陽,走路時,搖晃的耳墜時而輕擊傘柄,發出清脆的聲音,便寫了這首詞。8964 copyright protection552PENANAD61xM8401Y 維尼
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寫詞比寫詩輕鬆很多,平仄要求較寬鬆,根據各詞詞牌而異,不一定一韻到底。故此,寫詞有較大的發揮空間,而詞的上下兩片亦可用作雙線記敍,如此詞所示,頗為有趣。8964 copyright protection552PENANAwncmSvFoDf 維尼
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【漢服・古裝】(圖片都在 IG 喔~)8964 copyright protection552PENANAeSYvpQV7sA 維尼
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那天穿著古裝,到家附近的小山拍照,途中人流不多,亦受到不少注目。8964 copyright protection552PENANARncPqBb3tN 維尼
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在香港,穿古裝的人極少,有些地方甚至不歡迎這樣「奇裝異服」的人走進(上網看到)。某程度來說,香港人在衣著方面比較保守,大家的衣著風格亦較相似。我亦鼓足了十二分的勇氣,才敢穿著古裝外出。8964 copyright protection552PENANA2RJXKvzfJV 維尼
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這套古裝是從一直光顧的網店購買,此店曾有售賣中西合璧的服裝,如將蕾絲、雪紡等材質,以及透膚設計融入交領漢服,既新穎又好看。8964 copyright protection552PENANArI4SwE8gkY 維尼
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這次此店首次發售漢服,我便立刻買下這套「中國風刺繡長洋裝」。未穿上時,藍白色的衣服驟眼看似校服(笑);穿上後卻非常好看,總像古時書院服飾,甚至是武俠小說中正派弟子的裝扮。8964 copyright protection552PENANAbWut6iZaPj 維尼
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穿上此服後,白色裙擺隨著微風擺動,好像天堂中飄浮的雲朵,令我想起「雲想衣裳」詩句(李白《清平調・其一》),詩人的描述確實非常貼切。8964 copyright protection552PENANA4WSnpMJUaA 維尼
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從小看就很喜歡看古裝劇,很大程度是因為喜歡那些美麗的衣裳。這次首次穿上,感到很高興,不捨得脫下。此外,我亦買了一對絲帶髮夾,但由於家中竟完全沒有細小橡皮圈,不能造髮型,便不作任何修飾。8964 copyright protection552PENANAfQX4ieOL8q 維尼
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最近遇事不順,常感失落,然而,每當寫詩、外出、倒頭睡一覺後,心情便平伏很多。人生不如意事十常八九,與其想太多,我還是做好自己,並多做自己喜歡的事便罷了。8964 copyright protection552PENANAHL6pvjinxr 維尼
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【相關詞句・韋莊】8964 copyright protection552PENANAqswaB2clbP 維尼
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*韋莊乃唐朝花間派詞人,與其時文人所寫的豔麗情詞不同,詞風清麗,情感真摯。8964 copyright protection552PENANAI04bSD2F2Q 維尼
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- 你身上有光
韋莊《浣溪沙》8964 copyright protection552PENANA8JTe0521zM 維尼
惆悵夢餘山月斜,孤燈照壁背紅紗。小樓高閣謝娘家。8964 copyright protection552PENANA3w50krlDzX 維尼
暗想玉容何所似?一枝春雪凍梅花,滿身香霧簇朝霞。8964 copyright protection552PENANANhSMVt0l4L 維尼
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*韋莊在與意中人分別後,暗想其玉容之美8964 copyright protection552PENANAHzoIc0H8eU 維尼
*一枝春雪凍梅花:春天,冰雪初融,薄薄的冰雪包裏着紅紅的梅花,晶瑩透亮;意中人的肌膚白裏透紅,水潤明亮8964 copyright protection552PENANAXGDcv3P0It 維尼
*滿身香霧簇朝霞:佳人滿身體香,在朝霞的映照下,既朦朧又美麗;身體好像被陽光籠罩,好像身體發光一樣——類似攝影的背光、光暈現象8964 copyright protection552PENANAeHNVYufWil 維尼
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- 愛姫被奪,刻骨相思
韋莊《荷葉杯》8964 copyright protection552PENANAqrrRCpzmW0 維尼
記得那年花下,深夜,初識謝娘時。水堂西面畫簾垂,攜手暗相期。8964 copyright protection552PENANAZWyO8ndJn3 維尼
惆悵曉鶯殘月,相別,從此隔音塵。如今俱是異鄉人,相見更無因。8964 copyright protection552PENANAcwT0kqYbfJ 維尼
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*楊偍《古今詞話》和蔣一葵《堯山堂外紀》記載:韋莊有寵姬,姿質豔麗,兼擅詞翰,爲蜀主王建所奪,於是作《荷葉杯》、《小重山》等詞,詞流入禁宮,姬聞之不食而死。8964 copyright protection552PENANAX6iC8utKiP 維尼
*花前月下,水堂西面,畫簾低垂,韋莊與謝娘在深夜相見,互相攜手,兩情相悅,暗自約定相會之期8964 copyright protection552PENANAWw27mpTseQ 維尼
*可惜好景不長,清晨鶯語響起,天邊只剩一輪殘月,二人就要分別,再未見面8964 copyright protection552PENANAQCZWwrR20u 維尼
*如今已成異鄉人,恐怕再無相見的機會8964 copyright protection552PENANAQLXuYnF1xW 維尼
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