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看卡作文！(第二回合)
ENTRY #4
Author: 田臻皮鹿
Published:
Jun 23, 2016
看卡作文！(第二回合)
Published:
Jun 23, 2016
ENTRY #4
懺悔之心
Author: 田臻皮鹿
Published:
Jun 23, 2016
1 Min Read
196 Words
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男孩是個慣性的偷竊犯，某日，男孩偷了外星人的特異黃豆。

外星人為了懲罰傑克，把他關在外星監獄裡。

男孩只要真心每日懺悔，就會吐出黑色殘物。

這讓男孩的內心漸漸變得有點不一樣!

一年過了，外星人告訴男孩可以離開這個地方了。

男孩在臨走前，往窗外看著自己的懺悔之語。

這些懺悔的話，會隨著每個時間點跳躍的撥放。

心中充滿五味雜陳，是自己長大了吧?

男孩一直以為自己，會永遠繼續這麼過日子!

在這段時間，他發現認識自己很重要!

屋頂的管子，又冒了一個，飄落在地上。

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