作者妳好738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSGxsy2hx2C
受到妳的邀请738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyHHpDGJMfN
稍微看了下这本佩姬738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAOHt8tzTBf
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAxpaJxoXCh
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqMulBco9Hs
现世一堆东西738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRAm2z1dWco
其实就很简单一个道理738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx8WwXeGJ38
主角想要被爱738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtnXLidlhcu
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡISL4JAb5Pu
男主卢克爱738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjKfT7vmxve
主角就爱回去738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCrRRalhFtI
女主伊莎爱738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQvENGQaxrC
主角就爱回去738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzN8k5Tq3b7
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbQ9cLeD9dT
想要被爱是佩姬的主题738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaDV3v7wPzp
主角性别不是问题738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSJmcd2sFOx
内心冲突不是问题738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSm7k9GHwvg
主角被爱就迎刃而解738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡztln65PpF1
看不懂这点整部书就看不了738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuZe59uNsnR
妳的书乏人问津是这道理738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5MaV6Z5lEZ
作者妳说主角口是心非738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCNW6V1BoA8
欸我说这不对738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo3JpJAQIYy
这明摆着口非心也非738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQPsFaoZUvm
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2qqdmfLVVF
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX6YyTSUHyz
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv03ySi8aSB
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcFez1cuUg6
为了被爱738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRR7VXk0QhR
连原本的性别都不要了738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuyh5MDkivE
这主角疯的傻的738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPZ4m7PSv9b
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡODZuSs7F70
女主伊莎738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1Q8pYRatHW
单纯的色鬼738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC5MyL7v6YX
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiVptshAfAK
黑化可能
艾德兰738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLLRTP8Tler
可怜虫阿738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkNWmWcsJX7
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbeRazVoLpy
妳说解释不够738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrYsTNnnuH0
我到觉得清楚738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjRxNQIpgEF
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxoK7YT99Dq
他为啥强738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFmy3RB5drN
妳啥都没讲738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyyy1zMQqj8
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3brpOh3OX9
也是除主角外最明白的角色738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHnZ5xYzN35
她就拿来爱主角的738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdgU1JRlUjj
功能性角色
还有其他许多738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCUM6PUCa7L
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBbkqbN9lws
可以瞧见妳的苦心738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwaDqfxzB6n
我觉得这没必要738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡslVo0ImC3j
好的台词提一次够了738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTrdJIW8v3N
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡscUxzFnr6C
我倒嫌设定囉嗦738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQaxcqlQ8st
空白很重要738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5a0XVLMxD0
没明白有没明白的好处738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxChpk6jOC7
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡamDoQ0heFY
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHt3M0TpN35
我还会继续看的738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9bBW2leD29
确实好看738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFbwciOTAj1
希望你这能写完738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3BpnwuViLx
能放上起点不738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLuzn0DdeMr
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYdMJ9Jm55m
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwHHLNqqTmB
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞738Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAA9LbGEZLt
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