作者妳好830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCb9tzZmlEh
受到妳的邀请830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfmlxg8gxPO
稍微看了下这本佩姬830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR5MZyeKz0a
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVGSLCySrPU
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgwxYOKbtSH
现世一堆东西830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO6kP5BXVGg
其实就很简单一个道理830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPQDQqOGL8z
主角想要被爱830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuDadfJMMbw
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡML7thQHPaW
男主卢克爱830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnFdulHEf04
主角就爱回去830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs6TSxCce3E
女主伊莎爱830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUS6qhN5dQO
主角就爱回去830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5gqxXhSLqC
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDfxygxidKL
想要被爱是佩姬的主题830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU38mtoLPuZ
主角性别不是问题830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWKAOaIYVsd
内心冲突不是问题830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu8BpXxy3hn
主角被爱就迎刃而解830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcO3a9Z8Nau
看不懂这点整部书就看不了830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbjNvfSZFP0
妳的书乏人问津是这道理830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5lkCPOMw08
作者妳说主角口是心非830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf0cPogu8mY
欸我说这不对830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAACQJ9CiQb
这明摆着口非心也非830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBlWYergPJ6
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkjYtYd2SxW
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaUaFBBhdUE
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1oWnUcQv6d
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDXhZTxwXfu
为了被爱830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7qUldRF4ti
连原本的性别都不要了830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWzgcV0y2cM
这主角疯的傻的830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqBCOLWThsw
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjtHXhvCJi2
女主伊莎830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2G4zuiWDaY
单纯的色鬼830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfYMJL02Kij
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNVswY9GCys
黑化可能
艾德兰830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEvsJkaSJMW
可怜虫阿830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZQUOK41vEb
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYNxzjIgdrp
妳说解释不够830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYxp4YW1tnX
我到觉得清楚830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3C4zn84Eed
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXpN9cP6OjB
他为啥强830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGd5pQViF9Q
妳啥都没讲830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ6otnAuuTz
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd5KKCDp3IQ
也是除主角外最明白的角色830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQRxT9A2Tot
她就拿来爱主角的830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgy1y4sAH1i
功能性角色
还有其他许多830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDFw9s4Xzi8
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUfZNHWnwTR
可以瞧见妳的苦心830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlOki5fmDUb
我觉得这没必要830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi5v2T00ixY
好的台词提一次够了830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkNlISDNrqF
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ64D4AKYaxH
我倒嫌设定囉嗦830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1WhzCKVe7o
空白很重要830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgSQ7FWe0DW
没明白有没明白的好处830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBylmUdWiJX
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpIjCZWiPVB
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJpTx1DVGag
我还会继续看的830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAMP9psXxq6
确实好看830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwerArUXub6
希望你这能写完830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1VsPIXoILE
能放上起点不830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL1EFwpx9IV
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmXuzqLnifI
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfLOTjQrY2L
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞830Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDIVeAqpsV6
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