作者妳好715Please respect copyright.PENANAQvWYpgZ0hp
受到妳的邀请715Please respect copyright.PENANAdP1NoRrKGP
稍微看了下这本佩姬715Please respect copyright.PENANAUccvwOqJQY
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法715Please respect copyright.PENANAX6Odx6lGpF
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西715Please respect copyright.PENANAL6l3Uq9niC
现世一堆东西715Please respect copyright.PENANAeZN7Ngyqlj
其实就很简单一个道理715Please respect copyright.PENANAoioGOGwHn3
主角想要被爱715Please respect copyright.PENANAv5xyCaaGqN
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱715Please respect copyright.PENANAUpoXWeOtvj
男主卢克爱715Please respect copyright.PENANAb27PFiawdE
主角就爱回去715Please respect copyright.PENANASt7XeEXE0H
女主伊莎爱715Please respect copyright.PENANApfKZGYgb8H
主角就爱回去715Please respect copyright.PENANAUUKC6gQcM4
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理715Please respect copyright.PENANA3267vdrBHJ
想要被爱是佩姬的主题715Please respect copyright.PENANA2OjPLObqhu
主角性别不是问题715Please respect copyright.PENANAfsH7TeVnQC
内心冲突不是问题715Please respect copyright.PENANA7R9B4OjHOP
主角被爱就迎刃而解715Please respect copyright.PENANAMl1fp1yatK
看不懂这点整部书就看不了715Please respect copyright.PENANAXgs0aiARi7
妳的书乏人问津是这道理715Please respect copyright.PENANAFZRcHFvwzF
作者妳说主角口是心非715Please respect copyright.PENANAWulrE4NoKb
欸我说这不对715Please respect copyright.PENANA4z5ls2Kt9W
这明摆着口非心也非715Please respect copyright.PENANA0CHqEwVu8z
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰715Please respect copyright.PENANAIplG7GaKV1
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵715Please respect copyright.PENANApdrgq5bGgr
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜715Please respect copyright.PENANAGjYvbE6sfH
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的715Please respect copyright.PENANAksBjgGSrGm
为了被爱715Please respect copyright.PENANARYJvh1yFJF
连原本的性别都不要了715Please respect copyright.PENANA7GwlxlCBvt
这主角疯的傻的715Please respect copyright.PENANAaSO5qbQJ0s
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色715Please respect copyright.PENANAz2y2oJCF1T
女主伊莎715Please respect copyright.PENANACzmvMe6vkI
单纯的色鬼715Please respect copyright.PENANAuSuFWdTBtq
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性715Please respect copyright.PENANAY2eTOZOx6B
黑化可能
艾德兰715Please respect copyright.PENANANkqtnQcPUe
可怜虫阿715Please respect copyright.PENANAxDZjEMNOpr
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了715Please respect copyright.PENANAZIWTDQ1OaC
妳说解释不够715Please respect copyright.PENANAcExZIibTcF
我到觉得清楚715Please respect copyright.PENANAU62nfCnywg
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够715Please respect copyright.PENANAJXrMPVHn7e
他为啥强715Please respect copyright.PENANAUXuwPfS8hs
妳啥都没讲715Please respect copyright.PENANAnhtRbDWB8X
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白715Please respect copyright.PENANAbDPoJtuaLo
也是除主角外最明白的角色715Please respect copyright.PENANA3PR6h5EPlI
她就拿来爱主角的715Please respect copyright.PENANAbdJw9rZu5s
功能性角色
还有其他许多715Please respect copyright.PENANAIoSdwPOq9P
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多715Please respect copyright.PENANANS5TsM0Osj
可以瞧见妳的苦心715Please respect copyright.PENANAIrIXgdwTxl
我觉得这没必要715Please respect copyright.PENANA26A4YKoB6M
好的台词提一次够了715Please respect copyright.PENANA4mNyZvLGco
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨715Please respect copyright.PENANAMkeDy5M8Ay
我倒嫌设定囉嗦715Please respect copyright.PENANApKuHKa4WFp
空白很重要715Please respect copyright.PENANARMmtwXGXln
没明白有没明白的好处715Please respect copyright.PENANAWgTnfJLLDy
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说715Please respect copyright.PENANAh1ejY8jkrd
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书715Please respect copyright.PENANAYiE2jCBVD6
我还会继续看的715Please respect copyright.PENANArjj72mOkij
确实好看715Please respect copyright.PENANAlKYg6TQRM3
希望你这能写完715Please respect copyright.PENANAY7SiNy0Yis
能放上起点不715Please respect copyright.PENANAy7JJtzmEgA
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
715Please respect copyright.PENANAbqZmCJo6m5
作者回應:715Please respect copyright.PENANAzElvUSMAzf
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,715Please respect copyright.PENANA7nnzqfpHKP
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,715Please respect copyright.PENANAXKtwSL3BQ7
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞715Please respect copyright.PENANAwMnyNV1Jsb
感謝你的評文715Please respect copyright.PENANAyNn2OZkOiu
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