寫在眩光劍「佩姬」第二卷完結之後 - 眩光劍「佩姬」- 對岸網友書評

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稍微看了下这本佩姬1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtbEDjL6DjU
确实有意思

说说自己对这小说的看法1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhgBSryD5Xn
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmHALN08icN
现世一堆东西1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡziyXQcZnLs
其实就很简单一个道理1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmu5gCefw6f
主角想要被爱1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJTEsYUO9L9
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeb2rFSctl7
男主卢克爱1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd7qu0Kly0y
主角就爱回去1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUpB8cjSl0F
女主伊莎爱1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDEJ1KmIPny
主角就爱回去1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp30yHyJthk
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo3xH5vSXoY
想要被爱是佩姬的主题1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwTsibJDqy9
主角性别不是问题1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd6RFOLDsfI
内心冲突不是问题1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHzVb8sb0c6
主角被爱就迎刃而解1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4XA27AEAuu
看不懂这点整部书就看不了1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOffn5A8aDI
妳的书乏人问津是这道理1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlVYoGFX7FG
作者妳说主角口是心非1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuFzB20UfF2
欸我说这不对1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNPqW83cWP8
这明摆着口非心也非1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6d4SOoq0Aa
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWRDz6sqdPs
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnE8E2ZOsS7
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpJ2daaiO5X
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDQclQOkix1
为了被爱1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFr1F8a1Lzf
连原本的性别都不要了1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUs84ycK6Xn
这主角疯的傻的1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3bbexFKjJm
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题

说说其它角色1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk6v1VAyepy
女主伊莎1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8r5hxonbSt
单纯的色鬼1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcthn8NjsIW
作者您没讲可我猜应有病娇属性1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqkBsZIRZM0
黑化可能

艾德兰1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw3M8Ds1VaM
可怜虫阿1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkPUIgP4P24
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqPweaouJog
妳说解释不够1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhKkc5KWNjE
我到觉得清楚1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDbkk4Qp9HW
这种事常见的阿

男主卢克才是那个写得不够1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuiaYmr9KKp
他为啥强1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡep4aCHNqAZ
妳啥都没讲1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs2Es5evjGK
这才是问题

主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEffQUyuYQz
也是除主角外最明白的角色1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡutFU9JRYz1
她就拿来爱主角的1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIP5wcEWIfD
功能性角色

还有其他许多1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPC68ge7uxo
我就不提了

妳在作品裡回收的台词很多1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRRxzQxScEM
可以瞧见妳的苦心1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYYkPBaaEfH
我觉得这没必要1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgnJGVxeWSQ
好的台词提一次够了1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpXqKV07At3
重提令人厌烦

妳说别的评文说设定不严谨1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfOcdDfBsh0
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没明白有没明白的好处1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD1unJVE2kw
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ7yo87VzU9
这就够了

谢谢作者妳邀我看这书1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvAIGiWA7eZ
我还会继续看的1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqeEzWlwVbe
确实好看1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ0fmRTQH0A
希望你这能写完1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9VaRBFovSt
能放上起点不1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkKarMLCRI7
这样我也好跟亲友推荐

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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWgSiFZaqVj
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，1021Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPJPrxauWBw
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