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稍微看了下这本佩姬807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgkS3XLsaVr
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVaH8zeBdeg
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMS1ArxeBfO
现世一堆东西807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡk31mowR26W
其实就很简单一个道理807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7fNjlhrYgE
主角想要被爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9YadGIS5tq
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzIwStZ3igp
男主卢克爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpbImG7fCeR
主角就爱回去807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN5gxN4m1ts
女主伊莎爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTo1USkqhcX
主角就爱回去807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpsXMYhOFv0
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡinrzc747FE
想要被爱是佩姬的主题807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7dvdwifBHA
主角性别不是问题807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6ycjjY66jP
内心冲突不是问题807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwXzUMn1B4n
主角被爱就迎刃而解807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa9FP7A0zIP
看不懂这点整部书就看不了807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrPHSaPgF3D
妳的书乏人问津是这道理807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRrdLIAlPul
作者妳说主角口是心非807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyJVYxuiEv4
欸我说这不对807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkeT6JWjUEf
这明摆着口非心也非807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN7oNXwujgz
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6IBV1LLIvq
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1yjxCQQXjh
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHln8qTSpBd
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNVdyiPgYdH
为了被爱807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqm6DY3fVEn
连原本的性别都不要了807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡarp1GLAZd8
这主角疯的傻的807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyej7miS53Z
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXLlAHjDwNw
女主伊莎807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwr4PJXm0NW
单纯的色鬼807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuu6WtK86nn
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡki4qiyZgxg
黑化可能
艾德兰807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSpOsBNjw2b
可怜虫阿807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpbCIJFoKuO
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCmponVPI7H
妳说解释不够807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOflRaYUOeW
我到觉得清楚807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvbKYqQZ7YC
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡurwNLfHSSz
他为啥强807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8J1TsbGWPF
妳啥都没讲807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2W25ZVgiy3
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDqrNKD4SOD
也是除主角外最明白的角色807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8MwOCrIuiw
她就拿来爱主角的807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqibbngdiCF
功能性角色
还有其他许多807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqXtifAT8bN
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6ZGmw8Dngd
可以瞧见妳的苦心807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1XRxZIptJt
我觉得这没必要807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5J43uLAeDP
好的台词提一次够了807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡH9oqL1SIF5
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtmJxqsptWi
我倒嫌设定囉嗦807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSY06jETZtn
空白很重要807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3CX3cXIKmw
没明白有没明白的好处807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtjx57dHUOJ
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsQXu1tkPYH
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpBSqsb9ZvR
我还会继续看的807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBzAerk5bJW
确实好看807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLnsAiSG4Fh
希望你这能写完807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlgtARVkp8M
能放上起点不807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoz9pekZrh7
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdUJoLygEHG
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyKQblEThan
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDnjKbzYKJo
感謝你的評文807Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3g5LWFZlwY
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