作者妳好763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVrzNwCNscg
受到妳的邀请763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2m9sjZ56fN
稍微看了下这本佩姬763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCVYG6hf9uf
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlh2ArAupGM
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡakFGkHtbMr
现世一堆东西763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPgILLvtxTG
其实就很简单一个道理763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtGpBgPF8Bb
主角想要被爱763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0cqVpKLe8N
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpMouSP35pD
男主卢克爱763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaq4c2ZGMw0
主角就爱回去763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9iAkhe0zCH
女主伊莎爱763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8clGfowFJ2
主角就爱回去763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ833LDTBHCl
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9xCkaAUkB7
想要被爱是佩姬的主题763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDFtwNArueG
主角性别不是问题763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJctWPhS9fX
内心冲突不是问题763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgsyqyEV6UM
主角被爱就迎刃而解763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLsLfF9kTPF
看不懂这点整部书就看不了763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGN3RJmCVm3
妳的书乏人问津是这道理763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0gtWNrnof6
作者妳说主角口是心非763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHpf7udDY0O
欸我说这不对763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj3IM8BGohV
这明摆着口非心也非763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7goVdCBNl4
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAY2t5HLFrO
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIVR0DuAfOy
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ1yjh1Arfv
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy0vUBIHrH1
为了被爱763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYxl2CnYDb8
连原本的性别都不要了763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSqklpkkElV
这主角疯的傻的763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0xCsufQokM
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSzLmeJMLhL
女主伊莎763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf6dfH6KjWp
单纯的色鬼763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRNeoPWEeIw
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOz8TuaqBhR
黑化可能
艾德兰763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqh5FkMOoNy
可怜虫阿763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAoCRVvTWGg
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlfjlYOXMJT
妳说解释不够763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo1vjQ2Ek3Z
我到觉得清楚763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡch9UXB2EjJ
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuCFtJUqBSF
他为啥强763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdIcbki0Kz3
妳啥都没讲763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡupVlzPiF7q
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfqysiEzt3T
也是除主角外最明白的角色763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu6wQxIVbOL
她就拿来爱主角的763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwN8gf3S6IB
功能性角色
还有其他许多763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl66ybHbVdD
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyybg5r0QcP
可以瞧见妳的苦心763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY5yH1Lu5Nn
我觉得这没必要763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYMG61rbbXt
好的台词提一次够了763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDjybTosEQW
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0YyeXziJXi
我倒嫌设定囉嗦763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKsveTwINL1
空白很重要763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhBIgGeyomu
没明白有没明白的好处763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTNIkq0K1Vj
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqBRuQHPHN1
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡN6twGQMkmP
我还会继续看的763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlqkKJWzAua
确实好看763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVxFS5oJf2P
希望你这能写完763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ94XuyHzejQ
能放上起点不763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbdNoLmDaK6
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6jIuWcYmcO
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgZxuil2GWw
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞763Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg1KgdBBnnd
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