作者妳好737Please respect copyright.PENANAlDZtN3frBm
受到妳的邀请737Please respect copyright.PENANAh2UEmch4lS
稍微看了下这本佩姬737Please respect copyright.PENANAKTDid3EgR4
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法737Please respect copyright.PENANAIyqW1FKGw1
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西737Please respect copyright.PENANAdAlCm39gG7
现世一堆东西737Please respect copyright.PENANAlBnEqWbQPo
其实就很简单一个道理737Please respect copyright.PENANA0m0oWHpLec
主角想要被爱737Please respect copyright.PENANAkGNOuctVfQ
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱737Please respect copyright.PENANAuSNbSDUKAR
男主卢克爱737Please respect copyright.PENANAJk2zY0eoWy
主角就爱回去737Please respect copyright.PENANAgcExSXsbcK
女主伊莎爱737Please respect copyright.PENANAVOb3t8KD9x
主角就爱回去737Please respect copyright.PENANAj8JK81hwG8
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理737Please respect copyright.PENANAPM6GvXRCMF
想要被爱是佩姬的主题737Please respect copyright.PENANALoT6036SDq
主角性别不是问题737Please respect copyright.PENANAKnnzgn2BRX
内心冲突不是问题737Please respect copyright.PENANAjKwnF6KVun
主角被爱就迎刃而解737Please respect copyright.PENANATpkQjj0BQE
看不懂这点整部书就看不了737Please respect copyright.PENANAesoy9F94J7
妳的书乏人问津是这道理737Please respect copyright.PENANAnfqHBHMzLw
作者妳说主角口是心非737Please respect copyright.PENANAWiecvPsuxz
欸我说这不对737Please respect copyright.PENANAMOVTUvuxt6
这明摆着口非心也非737Please respect copyright.PENANAsLxwtRZkqq
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰737Please respect copyright.PENANAxh1hQa75m1
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵737Please respect copyright.PENANAUgE9N8S8yB
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜737Please respect copyright.PENANA2twA312j6T
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的737Please respect copyright.PENANAYjVEtLN34C
为了被爱737Please respect copyright.PENANA2fqiu8vtE5
连原本的性别都不要了737Please respect copyright.PENANAlo3wP3aG2D
这主角疯的傻的737Please respect copyright.PENANA2SQpN0MIU4
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色737Please respect copyright.PENANAQ4Q1FmRLNs
女主伊莎737Please respect copyright.PENANAJLwRE1marh
单纯的色鬼737Please respect copyright.PENANAaGw95AosdV
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性737Please respect copyright.PENANAnrzxzMD7vN
黑化可能
艾德兰737Please respect copyright.PENANArXbyCTxAmE
可怜虫阿737Please respect copyright.PENANAkgN6aUvZs4
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了737Please respect copyright.PENANABPCMvDpEdc
妳说解释不够737Please respect copyright.PENANAuYzAM3MH6j
我到觉得清楚737Please respect copyright.PENANAD9QNbTEO9a
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够737Please respect copyright.PENANA2JBe7FAipn
他为啥强737Please respect copyright.PENANANoLa7uEcge
妳啥都没讲737Please respect copyright.PENANAYsJUcGEsxd
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白737Please respect copyright.PENANAsvXr7m7Sdo
也是除主角外最明白的角色737Please respect copyright.PENANAAkQYqKWMiG
她就拿来爱主角的737Please respect copyright.PENANAGAcb3m8rpS
功能性角色
还有其他许多737Please respect copyright.PENANAIAQHZEFfCJ
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多737Please respect copyright.PENANAbx5XjPTyog
可以瞧见妳的苦心737Please respect copyright.PENANARk8LyojnA3
我觉得这没必要737Please respect copyright.PENANAS0WufPPRgE
好的台词提一次够了737Please respect copyright.PENANApmQHSD3fzx
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨737Please respect copyright.PENANAlURDXCAJ9U
我倒嫌设定囉嗦737Please respect copyright.PENANACBUQLtASpZ
空白很重要737Please respect copyright.PENANAcKOudRpabf
没明白有没明白的好处737Please respect copyright.PENANALEZ8Cge6IT
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说737Please respect copyright.PENANAFR6JmJ1apV
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书737Please respect copyright.PENANASHy3YSebRt
我还会继续看的737Please respect copyright.PENANATIJOcaanEh
确实好看737Please respect copyright.PENANARrqvanHpfb
希望你这能写完737Please respect copyright.PENANA7F6ycONq7D
能放上起点不737Please respect copyright.PENANAMnhLdzffBK
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
737Please respect copyright.PENANATgYKcp1nve
作者回應:737Please respect copyright.PENANAagjUCQkVa9
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,737Please respect copyright.PENANASEZWx1wDNJ
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,737Please respect copyright.PENANA0zsW9nJYtr
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞737Please respect copyright.PENANALJ8OVfQUQt
感謝你的評文737Please respect copyright.PENANAvyPsBMrjcQ
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