作者妳好482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6rX9YsXdBH
受到妳的邀请482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1eyn46ux6h
稍微看了下这本佩姬482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBYRaWSjt2x
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDzLHpph47G
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡs8N0DxMlhp
现世一堆东西482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0Q3KQGyiEx
其实就很简单一个道理482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiMSRlsoiZL
主角想要被爱482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQZrO9qrKzW
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp833auGCP1
男主卢克爱482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlaX5SUqPAm
主角就爱回去482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXRi9oCbZfS
女主伊莎爱482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG0EEiamO6W
主角就爱回去482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR78cH6w2N7
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0rEnGVCwvb
想要被爱是佩姬的主题482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe5ncjxa0k7
主角性别不是问题482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeE2pXqvUxO
内心冲突不是问题482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡctPdwNWzqW
主角被爱就迎刃而解482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVbVX3auz8T
看不懂这点整部书就看不了482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAZan7YAdHE
妳的书乏人问津是这道理482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpQDBgNLg8I
作者妳说主角口是心非482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4s0wLGHsf3
欸我说这不对482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdBuhPyyWkm
这明摆着口非心也非482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXhveB93hv3
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYTBy3yTUyJ
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJlqSieaLg3
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm33iUFsA7Q
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD70SJxy7db
为了被爱482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqAS1F8vzsY
连原本的性别都不要了482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGSxRrpjZ55
这主角疯的傻的482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLl5d7nI4QS
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6Wju20sNsQ
女主伊莎482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXVtM40JFtR
单纯的色鬼482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡksOIbg70s9
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz2Ii0gy7iw
黑化可能
艾德兰482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCVlNqfEg3Y
可怜虫阿482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDol2MtDDqR
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdeZC2HkL6a
妳说解释不够482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡns40B7mfdu
我到觉得清楚482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkVnud6cuJN
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5A2BhHEHkP
他为啥强482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLz4bclYCia
妳啥都没讲482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcMZUGwIiov
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnn9RF3Fnnz
也是除主角外最明白的角色482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcUFLv4lAx7
她就拿来爱主角的482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBgPFelWNwK
功能性角色
还有其他许多482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBIIekj5dSs
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEENka5n7v2
可以瞧见妳的苦心482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfTOLfVMxEM
我觉得这没必要482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3R2OhvVEV4
好的台词提一次够了482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzpW5XFVdLo
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoBAQpBVAPa
我倒嫌设定囉嗦482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfWvj7A6coq
空白很重要482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7YhaSbJHVg
没明白有没明白的好处482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRwRYJT5QQR
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFaTaGviFU3
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqAT9jHUsOy
我还会继续看的482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu4NoaPzgQt
确实好看482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpXb1amvwjK
希望你这能写完482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ08RlZZ72Zj
能放上起点不482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMQe9ZJV2uz
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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUnqd2TddFa
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsCGl0WWjLG
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感謝你的評文482Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdlwMwdfKM9
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