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稍微看了下这本佩姬715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUccvwOqJQY
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX6Odx6lGpF
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL6l3Uq9niC
现世一堆东西715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeZN7Ngyqlj
其实就很简单一个道理715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoioGOGwHn3
主角想要被爱715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv5xyCaaGqN
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主角就爱回去715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUUKC6gQcM4
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3267vdrBHJ
想要被爱是佩姬的主题715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2OjPLObqhu
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看不懂这点整部书就看不了715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXgs0aiARi7
妳的书乏人问津是这道理715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFZRcHFvwzF
作者妳说主角口是心非715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWulrE4NoKb
欸我说这不对715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4z5ls2Kt9W
这明摆着口非心也非715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0CHqEwVu8z
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIplG7GaKV1
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如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡksBjgGSrGm
为了被爱715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRYJvh1yFJF
连原本的性别都不要了715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7GwlxlCBvt
这主角疯的傻的715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaSO5qbQJ0s
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz2y2oJCF1T
女主伊莎715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCzmvMe6vkI
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黑化可能
艾德兰715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNkqtnQcPUe
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这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZIWTDQ1OaC
妳说解释不够715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcExZIibTcF
我到觉得清楚715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU62nfCnywg
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJXrMPVHn7e
他为啥强715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUXuwPfS8hs
妳啥都没讲715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnhtRbDWB8X
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbDPoJtuaLo
也是除主角外最明白的角色715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3PR6h5EPlI
她就拿来爱主角的715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbdJw9rZu5s
功能性角色
还有其他许多715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIoSdwPOq9P
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNS5TsM0Osj
可以瞧见妳的苦心715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIrIXgdwTxl
我觉得这没必要715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ26A4YKoB6M
好的台词提一次够了715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4mNyZvLGco
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMkeDy5M8Ay
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空白很重要715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRMmtwXGXln
没明白有没明白的好处715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWgTnfJLLDy
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh1ejY8jkrd
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYiE2jCBVD6
我还会继续看的715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrjj72mOkij
确实好看715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlKYg6TQRM3
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能放上起点不715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy7JJtzmEgA
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，715Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXKtwSL3BQ7
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