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稍微看了下这本佩姬737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKTDid3EgR4
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIyqW1FKGw1
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdAlCm39gG7
现世一堆东西737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlBnEqWbQPo
其实就很简单一个道理737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0m0oWHpLec
主角想要被爱737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkGNOuctVfQ
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuSNbSDUKAR
男主卢克爱737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJk2zY0eoWy
主角就爱回去737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgcExSXsbcK
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主角就爱回去737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj8JK81hwG8
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPM6GvXRCMF
想要被爱是佩姬的主题737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLoT6036SDq
主角性别不是问题737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKnnzgn2BRX
内心冲突不是问题737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjKwnF6KVun
主角被爱就迎刃而解737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTpkQjj0BQE
看不懂这点整部书就看不了737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡesoy9F94J7
妳的书乏人问津是这道理737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnfqHBHMzLw
作者妳说主角口是心非737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWiecvPsuxz
欸我说这不对737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMOVTUvuxt6
这明摆着口非心也非737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsLxwtRZkqq
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxh1hQa75m1
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUgE9N8S8yB
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2twA312j6T
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYjVEtLN34C
为了被爱737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2fqiu8vtE5
连原本的性别都不要了737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlo3wP3aG2D
这主角疯的傻的737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2SQpN0MIU4
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ4Q1FmRLNs
女主伊莎737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJLwRE1marh
单纯的色鬼737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaGw95AosdV
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnrzxzMD7vN
黑化可能
艾德兰737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrXbyCTxAmE
可怜虫阿737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkgN6aUvZs4
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBPCMvDpEdc
妳说解释不够737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuYzAM3MH6j
我到觉得清楚737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD9QNbTEO9a
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2JBe7FAipn
他为啥强737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNoLa7uEcge
妳啥都没讲737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYsJUcGEsxd
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsvXr7m7Sdo
也是除主角外最明白的角色737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAkQYqKWMiG
她就拿来爱主角的737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGAcb3m8rpS
功能性角色
还有其他许多737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIAQHZEFfCJ
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbx5XjPTyog
可以瞧见妳的苦心737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRk8LyojnA3
我觉得这没必要737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS0WufPPRgE
好的台词提一次够了737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpmQHSD3fzx
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlURDXCAJ9U
我倒嫌设定囉嗦737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCBUQLtASpZ
空白很重要737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcKOudRpabf
没明白有没明白的好处737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLEZ8Cge6IT
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFR6JmJ1apV
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSHy3YSebRt
我还会继续看的737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTIJOcaanEh
确实好看737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRrqvanHpfb
希望你这能写完737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7F6ycONq7D
能放上起点不737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMnhLdzffBK
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSEZWx1wDNJ
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，737Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0zsW9nJYtr
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