作者妳好483Please respect copyright.PENANArxkTmApa8p
受到妳的邀请483Please respect copyright.PENANAgI3d9t4ImZ
稍微看了下这本佩姬483Please respect copyright.PENANAMTCuQ88K3N
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法483Please respect copyright.PENANAG8pfxEGFZI
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西483Please respect copyright.PENANA0kUL9MzSMJ
现世一堆东西483Please respect copyright.PENANAK7Uj3YUzKh
其实就很简单一个道理483Please respect copyright.PENANAn0GxgrcRRl
主角想要被爱483Please respect copyright.PENANAbHjaAtCtjj
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱483Please respect copyright.PENANA7Us03n4zRo
男主卢克爱483Please respect copyright.PENANAPpbDuAOa7P
主角就爱回去483Please respect copyright.PENANAAh6LM27CCc
女主伊莎爱483Please respect copyright.PENANAJaEpndbrSp
主角就爱回去483Please respect copyright.PENANApSOw6laXkL
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理483Please respect copyright.PENANATfF3RE3WVl
想要被爱是佩姬的主题483Please respect copyright.PENANAoApNiybAWf
主角性别不是问题483Please respect copyright.PENANAEG529HpXQM
内心冲突不是问题483Please respect copyright.PENANAN6zKXCYHw1
主角被爱就迎刃而解483Please respect copyright.PENANA7emiPE3EFn
看不懂这点整部书就看不了483Please respect copyright.PENANAXFl6JqchnR
妳的书乏人问津是这道理483Please respect copyright.PENANAVCNeQHNQI9
作者妳说主角口是心非483Please respect copyright.PENANA9XNBrJp0OL
欸我说这不对483Please respect copyright.PENANASdLFIUTArQ
这明摆着口非心也非483Please respect copyright.PENANA528L5s49tz
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰483Please respect copyright.PENANANKvgql6hbw
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵483Please respect copyright.PENANARzABr1aIoZ
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜483Please respect copyright.PENANAYcEmbfPvJa
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的483Please respect copyright.PENANA1xImrji4xA
为了被爱483Please respect copyright.PENANA8tNee880KN
连原本的性别都不要了483Please respect copyright.PENANAdETuIPS8Cf
这主角疯的傻的483Please respect copyright.PENANA5NmD2eXYLl
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色483Please respect copyright.PENANAIeL0RThlqe
女主伊莎483Please respect copyright.PENANAD4ISsfN69n
单纯的色鬼483Please respect copyright.PENANALZpSrTL5L2
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性483Please respect copyright.PENANAGFynt0GbAb
黑化可能
艾德兰483Please respect copyright.PENANA6j03qtVpPg
可怜虫阿483Please respect copyright.PENANAlddiClEWUe
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了483Please respect copyright.PENANARkLe5f6jcB
妳说解释不够483Please respect copyright.PENANAXUY6ygdU9Z
我到觉得清楚483Please respect copyright.PENANAqOqt58D20M
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够483Please respect copyright.PENANApDv8YIXaty
他为啥强483Please respect copyright.PENANA32JNnmknsm
妳啥都没讲483Please respect copyright.PENANAWxQcSgVYS1
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白483Please respect copyright.PENANAD1jZchS7g3
也是除主角外最明白的角色483Please respect copyright.PENANATVgpruel8F
她就拿来爱主角的483Please respect copyright.PENANAmPsGliJMfF
功能性角色
还有其他许多483Please respect copyright.PENANA2rShStHzRH
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多483Please respect copyright.PENANAgNROYElNww
可以瞧见妳的苦心483Please respect copyright.PENANAcN631n4Cws
我觉得这没必要483Please respect copyright.PENANAnabGi7c1Hs
好的台词提一次够了483Please respect copyright.PENANACKmxLuKcCM
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨483Please respect copyright.PENANAaM9hg7h7RQ
我倒嫌设定囉嗦483Please respect copyright.PENANAxR9009H6o0
空白很重要483Please respect copyright.PENANAv0Yz1AIB33
没明白有没明白的好处483Please respect copyright.PENANAdwktpTyGwD
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说483Please respect copyright.PENANASerU30HFbx
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书483Please respect copyright.PENANASrjfo86Et0
我还会继续看的483Please respect copyright.PENANADRIjt5a5Ki
确实好看483Please respect copyright.PENANAtOngqoTx0n
希望你这能写完483Please respect copyright.PENANA9yw6wRYfcf
能放上起点不483Please respect copyright.PENANAyEySlJQfBW
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
483Please respect copyright.PENANAYkspnbhI5P
作者回應:483Please respect copyright.PENANAQgHecfSsSI
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,483Please respect copyright.PENANAinjQ6JwtYd
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,483Please respect copyright.PENANAbRsh7I0x71
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞483Please respect copyright.PENANAot4VSaywGN
感謝你的評文483Please respect copyright.PENANABFDD48DyzU
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