作者妳好828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6dPEIvX9gY
受到妳的邀请828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhcpqm3xycW
稍微看了下这本佩姬828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQm8crT5Ozc
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiYgX36xy3P
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaAu3Jmu7pK
现世一堆东西828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYcAwMvIim5
其实就很简单一个道理828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTWBzsccwfx
主角想要被爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDwT9OQsZgL
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM5DL2wqqbM
男主卢克爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYIfz2R2zVd
主角就爱回去828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqLnakD4xaA
女主伊莎爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYzC4CEWbXh
主角就爱回去828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNPsLya81dA
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt3gziFrwuX
想要被爱是佩姬的主题828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuy2gsAXJLv
主角性别不是问题828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtlfGBVbkZu
内心冲突不是问题828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbuDWZmJhsj
主角被爱就迎刃而解828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTMjMh6E31A
看不懂这点整部书就看不了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc92UuvwQVa
妳的书乏人问津是这道理828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSpU5lVCV7v
作者妳说主角口是心非828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKqRK05iAUn
欸我说这不对828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡytxDQCTC2x
这明摆着口非心也非828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8MAuYZKY3O
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡel1YkcbTm4
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlXEmgNzWh8
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtiuTKJIgnk
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzeXG0G35xJ
为了被爱828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeoNuG7alhn
连原本的性别都不要了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlQFbiAc5jD
这主角疯的傻的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjyMp8T5bdc
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW12S4bow84
女主伊莎828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz1luDxPbU3
单纯的色鬼828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrYwww56veX
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPkimJ1YtIC
黑化可能
艾德兰828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGEg6fhckMa
可怜虫阿828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIk9ej5LwmL
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg4tdYikM3S
妳说解释不够828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1GyATs9DQG
我到觉得清楚828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2Y6qqVuatB
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzgpaHekDOa
他为啥强828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe8kNbZQ6jq
妳啥都没讲828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYmhBkjVJ0L
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5IvkGLHPva
也是除主角外最明白的角色828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi1tkvvxlpz
她就拿来爱主角的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBBvMtQklWt
功能性角色
还有其他许多828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7UVyTfrCv5
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡisgQ8Slwbd
可以瞧见妳的苦心828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcPLSpVgsyx
我觉得这没必要828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnAlO8zuEeb
好的台词提一次够了828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRDyNkwqM7X
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQs39bequwL
我倒嫌设定囉嗦828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8WN0GTqqhX
空白很重要828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa3L065eeH3
没明白有没明白的好处828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOrP0qPnSoV
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡosewLaVH32
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyQ4DQaC0H8
我还会继续看的828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdDQKThwznS
确实好看828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx71i8KOqtm
希望你这能写完828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHzm2c0eFOH
能放上起点不828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw9j8bQQgt4
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9mtl0uptHw
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZvyy3R4WMm
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLLa1dBP3P5
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCk76Wn9aJg
感謝你的評文828Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSErXjtaxoy
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