作者妳好727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFGxDKTwoxN
受到妳的邀请727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJZRZFBp1xL
稍微看了下这本佩姬727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡURBMlV5Uje
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtvaw7MdrYn
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxHbJEWiOwM
现世一堆东西727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnfrI4UhaUS
其实就很简单一个道理727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbZX0XJpvyX
主角想要被爱727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡt8a9gVjR6t
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB0HD8EFgbJ
男主卢克爱727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQIF1rfkbYe
主角就爱回去727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtnIERyfkzf
女主伊莎爱727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx2SoXNhy7p
主角就爱回去727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXMHA1NCptp
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqnhpnKwCgO
想要被爱是佩姬的主题727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4neHaFylV8
主角性别不是问题727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRm9Z3m8XLK
内心冲突不是问题727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWrkc7JoMqa
主角被爱就迎刃而解727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡavcRcDxBsn
看不懂这点整部书就看不了727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJJA8HhlePu
妳的书乏人问津是这道理727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfH8gSr4vEt
作者妳说主角口是心非727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg1zqp2e3Ca
欸我说这不对727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtNMVEQOW9s
这明摆着口非心也非727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwmbmELQNyv
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrQtujXvF2E
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd3aUBQebyR
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbxtEUspJfH
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTL0S0YBG6n
为了被爱727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡi7QaKO2cH7
连原本的性别都不要了727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡePOwXZJDm0
这主角疯的傻的727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAESu6aFco5
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe19NvfZU8O
女主伊莎727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ57Jj701B1z
单纯的色鬼727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6OUjpQ7xAD
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5pTGnzmLau
黑化可能
艾德兰727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkSwhL5nWym
可怜虫阿727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe36lkZJGgo
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiYC88dxll1
妳说解释不够727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgmgGUw0RkY
我到觉得清楚727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlFeekq6NvU
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8Un4gveg1M
他为啥强727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiRYghORIwF
妳啥都没讲727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuWD98yNVnK
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBtLKZY9hTN
也是除主角外最明白的角色727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbqk0gQM5ql
她就拿来爱主角的727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡql3XAVBP4W
功能性角色
还有其他许多727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFGZTW1Y8mj
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYMaJG0UD4y
可以瞧见妳的苦心727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ6IBpBIS5O
我觉得这没必要727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkUiNP4JdW9
好的台词提一次够了727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtBvmFW9YOE
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTxIQuG7yh8
我倒嫌设定囉嗦727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDNAup2xbEw
空白很重要727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaAU1xhHmmg
没明白有没明白的好处727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkHQEThvEp2
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡahP2gxNu6x
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡL3RotbcviD
我还会继续看的727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1fFkcErjzz
确实好看727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhcLyONZoOx
希望你这能写完727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZzE23Tst7N
能放上起点不727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHofOFkyIkt
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYlzLjGz3Se
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgziQdESRsC
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9O3jTUz5vB
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFi0aVMCARk
感謝你的評文727Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3cq0F0Q0B6
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