作者妳好779Please respect copyright.PENANAWphLjtOcve
受到妳的邀请779Please respect copyright.PENANAqwuLs4OEWm
稍微看了下这本佩姬779Please respect copyright.PENANAnfbk8kXAGS
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法779Please respect copyright.PENANAq8vZQb38kJ
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西779Please respect copyright.PENANAOOohDHcfnN
现世一堆东西779Please respect copyright.PENANAKJs0Apqtkh
其实就很简单一个道理779Please respect copyright.PENANAu5ztk5qqiw
主角想要被爱779Please respect copyright.PENANAFtSLSrwRCQ
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱779Please respect copyright.PENANAiK9UuXFOZo
男主卢克爱779Please respect copyright.PENANAUKMDuWPt0u
主角就爱回去779Please respect copyright.PENANA1kCWSdfSRY
女主伊莎爱779Please respect copyright.PENANA3NornChWMI
主角就爱回去779Please respect copyright.PENANAG73o4FcRtv
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理779Please respect copyright.PENANAuSsHJOK3Mr
想要被爱是佩姬的主题779Please respect copyright.PENANAQ305pNcQRx
主角性别不是问题779Please respect copyright.PENANALogpKdwS8b
内心冲突不是问题779Please respect copyright.PENANAB1fBk94J90
主角被爱就迎刃而解779Please respect copyright.PENANAiew713k2td
看不懂这点整部书就看不了779Please respect copyright.PENANAXv4Jkyqs31
妳的书乏人问津是这道理779Please respect copyright.PENANAjUeLDpdore
作者妳说主角口是心非779Please respect copyright.PENANAHieynAOxks
欸我说这不对779Please respect copyright.PENANAaxXfLLEaQa
这明摆着口非心也非779Please respect copyright.PENANAZDtVSz6E3K
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰779Please respect copyright.PENANA1IDDx21i6J
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵779Please respect copyright.PENANA9YDN3Ku0ke
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜779Please respect copyright.PENANAAzFRbUjVVA
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的779Please respect copyright.PENANA4WhAkjCECp
为了被爱779Please respect copyright.PENANAa6lhoG5iKt
连原本的性别都不要了779Please respect copyright.PENANAlLJWgpECRT
这主角疯的傻的779Please respect copyright.PENANAsQK1WGvz2i
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色779Please respect copyright.PENANAB6rHGqBQEJ
女主伊莎779Please respect copyright.PENANADKQY3wPzic
单纯的色鬼779Please respect copyright.PENANAESGL74eE23
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性779Please respect copyright.PENANAiEXZme780K
黑化可能
艾德兰779Please respect copyright.PENANAhDETkAmSNi
可怜虫阿779Please respect copyright.PENANALqE5sqddBd
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了779Please respect copyright.PENANAq2KJvsaYxn
妳说解释不够779Please respect copyright.PENANA8ghf0QFzMC
我到觉得清楚779Please respect copyright.PENANAsgmojZW1hl
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够779Please respect copyright.PENANAE5DvtTyBw7
他为啥强779Please respect copyright.PENANAHeQjli5gTk
妳啥都没讲779Please respect copyright.PENANA7FoiXYk5cP
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白779Please respect copyright.PENANAikVV2U0gRZ
也是除主角外最明白的角色779Please respect copyright.PENANAJKLy7iki3S
她就拿来爱主角的779Please respect copyright.PENANAGpr9rCI889
功能性角色
还有其他许多779Please respect copyright.PENANAFoEFlEReAr
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多779Please respect copyright.PENANAl5h82aujRL
可以瞧见妳的苦心779Please respect copyright.PENANA6UPMgNwFzA
我觉得这没必要779Please respect copyright.PENANAX18UYiAzAx
好的台词提一次够了779Please respect copyright.PENANA4Tn4MkM5r4
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨779Please respect copyright.PENANAQTzN9aEZgW
我倒嫌设定囉嗦779Please respect copyright.PENANACU6kOOeChV
空白很重要779Please respect copyright.PENANAhWAYqx3DCB
没明白有没明白的好处779Please respect copyright.PENANAS81cFMpxH1
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说779Please respect copyright.PENANAiDZ2v2LxWh
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书779Please respect copyright.PENANAHGHhmaWl0F
我还会继续看的779Please respect copyright.PENANAFnAgbuPyCt
确实好看779Please respect copyright.PENANAYVErTk8OnB
希望你这能写完779Please respect copyright.PENANALS4dOPOOr5
能放上起点不779Please respect copyright.PENANAAMClaqvYME
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
779Please respect copyright.PENANA95VSqHylFc
作者回應:779Please respect copyright.PENANAuDjzVXAMeH
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,779Please respect copyright.PENANAnax8fMf1Rf
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,779Please respect copyright.PENANA5nnr7eC6rf
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞779Please respect copyright.PENANAkVpNH58wP2
感謝你的評文779Please respect copyright.PENANAso6EIjyASg
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