作者妳好754Please respect copyright.PENANAnOB8jkcmTH
受到妳的邀请754Please respect copyright.PENANA1gDqeyBXsx
稍微看了下这本佩姬754Please respect copyright.PENANAQM6TU9FPbZ
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法754Please respect copyright.PENANALqj8vq5CAp
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西754Please respect copyright.PENANAAxClMNRedv
现世一堆东西754Please respect copyright.PENANABhe6NwcE4Y
其实就很简单一个道理754Please respect copyright.PENANADpf27VYCmK
主角想要被爱754Please respect copyright.PENANA98sS2RxiGV
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱754Please respect copyright.PENANAnIjGeSQ7Ep
男主卢克爱754Please respect copyright.PENANAsxUI2f4eZI
主角就爱回去754Please respect copyright.PENANAavgzC2q36C
女主伊莎爱754Please respect copyright.PENANACxv0ihLMKy
主角就爱回去754Please respect copyright.PENANAcbik3MaE1y
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理754Please respect copyright.PENANASiBYN8ym63
想要被爱是佩姬的主题754Please respect copyright.PENANA0Rc2gu8v6z
主角性别不是问题754Please respect copyright.PENANAvBDGHjIr2F
内心冲突不是问题754Please respect copyright.PENANA3l9A30RXQz
主角被爱就迎刃而解754Please respect copyright.PENANApgPFjvLaid
看不懂这点整部书就看不了754Please respect copyright.PENANA05qnvvD2Cg
妳的书乏人问津是这道理754Please respect copyright.PENANA5zpOoG2OOF
作者妳说主角口是心非754Please respect copyright.PENANAOkoFj3YlSo
欸我说这不对754Please respect copyright.PENANALLLFkeYTBH
这明摆着口非心也非754Please respect copyright.PENANAUGqUoiLZui
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰754Please respect copyright.PENANAC93WLjHJr5
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵754Please respect copyright.PENANAuNW9qCEDJ8
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜754Please respect copyright.PENANAFgMJvFJvjo
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的754Please respect copyright.PENANAmfyUove12d
为了被爱754Please respect copyright.PENANAxUXyLsYdwn
连原本的性别都不要了754Please respect copyright.PENANAh8KZaD2wSm
这主角疯的傻的754Please respect copyright.PENANAAKpK0RrgZ9
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色754Please respect copyright.PENANA3EAQ3VDJlF
女主伊莎754Please respect copyright.PENANA9uLd9Ovwo5
单纯的色鬼754Please respect copyright.PENANAjRtVDyHkcc
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性754Please respect copyright.PENANAZ7CMr8gURN
黑化可能
艾德兰754Please respect copyright.PENANAqcNwW4rp4Z
可怜虫阿754Please respect copyright.PENANA1AmFNrnAxZ
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了754Please respect copyright.PENANAcWuJHnWns2
妳说解释不够754Please respect copyright.PENANACQJaw7Mawt
我到觉得清楚754Please respect copyright.PENANArkMcvpF9No
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够754Please respect copyright.PENANAx34J6UexVl
他为啥强754Please respect copyright.PENANAyKIQNlYMCT
妳啥都没讲754Please respect copyright.PENANATsWqXi0ZwL
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白754Please respect copyright.PENANAGEDmLbLdNY
也是除主角外最明白的角色754Please respect copyright.PENANAHFGV9Ss2Ym
她就拿来爱主角的754Please respect copyright.PENANA8k06oh9pt6
功能性角色
还有其他许多754Please respect copyright.PENANAIALgiDqU6Y
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多754Please respect copyright.PENANAG4ZYKlrTEk
可以瞧见妳的苦心754Please respect copyright.PENANAwNwTyWnM2P
我觉得这没必要754Please respect copyright.PENANACnG5ikUeOW
好的台词提一次够了754Please respect copyright.PENANAbLPdbJPf73
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨754Please respect copyright.PENANA0eTh0H5ebm
我倒嫌设定囉嗦754Please respect copyright.PENANA0mezQQj49y
空白很重要754Please respect copyright.PENANAWa7TzUybbq
没明白有没明白的好处754Please respect copyright.PENANATDcFOHmr9m
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说754Please respect copyright.PENANAr1gfAhXb9i
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书754Please respect copyright.PENANAWc3VPP9Nm8
我还会继续看的754Please respect copyright.PENANA5ygaAoQz1x
确实好看754Please respect copyright.PENANA9ZD6tC5J5X
希望你这能写完754Please respect copyright.PENANAR7f02snbrv
能放上起点不754Please respect copyright.PENANAJ5vy1otxt2
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
754Please respect copyright.PENANAoRbIRCbf03
作者回應:754Please respect copyright.PENANAAXl63wsGrG
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節,754Please respect copyright.PENANAskq4haInvq
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事,754Please respect copyright.PENANA6iPFdsC5kA
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞754Please respect copyright.PENANAwmTM3mDbXS
感謝你的評文754Please respect copyright.PENANAw7SJAsk8jJ
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