作者妳好820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb5YhjmqjQA
受到妳的邀请820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfkmDbzMMaU
稍微看了下这本佩姬820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡieRvIv2DSb
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCUlHEvEY7p
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjQyCJGknBu
现世一堆东西820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4W9fu6sH9S
其实就很简单一个道理820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRxFsAj7Ze5
主角想要被爱820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡj2nAl26mMy
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1jgDcii71V
男主卢克爱820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeCkN5emKTL
主角就爱回去820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYs3V1p5jrX
女主伊莎爱820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwTw7dNrrp3
主角就爱回去820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡg57thJFaaS
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDNVU3uvFFg
想要被爱是佩姬的主题820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY40ssp9wcQ
主角性别不是问题820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmRwweoQsnF
内心冲突不是问题820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwy3M83bpfR
主角被爱就迎刃而解820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQEI5MnbQ5I
看不懂这点整部书就看不了820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvxzrHWMp65
妳的书乏人问津是这道理820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfaiJpcRID8
作者妳说主角口是心非820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZV5T2oSPoA
欸我说这不对820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHe88LOVuqb
这明摆着口非心也非820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡshAHmOWQ6l
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyaYhE1rZuG
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSKRCFQVL9p
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9oNrdbT6Kh
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDzW8iUq1C5
为了被爱820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡy7VnxXY1j8
连原本的性别都不要了820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMBzVGE9jCn
这主角疯的傻的820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1NnvmRCoMW
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡavTvtwyS6d
女主伊莎820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGoHuL8nvCv
单纯的色鬼820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdmq0qKKfAj
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdFwTPKA0mI
黑化可能
艾德兰820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQENFHevWPI
可怜虫阿820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡodDy9uqZbE
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8USwZ381EV
妳说解释不够820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo0fFZI32j1
我到觉得清楚820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqkw26ODvej
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR3oTYotO1P
他为啥强820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdyk2fxsbnH
妳啥都没讲820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpxth4ftLTq
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4QFga55VzJ
也是除主角外最明白的角色820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ2IOgaW4VA
她就拿来爱主角的820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcpChmgVeDX
功能性角色
还有其他许多820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn2ldUhHGUp
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1gJFibd47s
可以瞧见妳的苦心820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkozRQiBp6W
我觉得这没必要820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBOYp7QoT7T
好的台词提一次够了820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfKo3BCX2bs
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWvEgEmyqtq
我倒嫌设定囉嗦820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhMEXllBjwI
空白很重要820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtu18QGWuoc
没明白有没明白的好处820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvckAyvxx5C
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡluxZ5V4F41
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYsRytrbgxa
我还会继续看的820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzwt2iTwn4l
确实好看820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWxdrTWoiCC
希望你这能写完820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdNRtAW6C3V
能放上起点不820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyfqlkSy1sL
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc19xsBKLkZ
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUcyQbdxGzu
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞820Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ8LuYCPdnO
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