寫在眩光劍「佩姬」第二卷完結之後 - 眩光劍「佩姬」- 對岸網友書評

作者妳好1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3YnrJYptop
受到妳的邀请1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCQ189uoRPz
稍微看了下这本佩姬1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVeLPDK1ffp
确实有意思

说说自己对这小说的看法1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMPw8JtggC5
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPt7NbavyKC
现世一堆东西1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5f7j4gEs35
其实就很简单一个道理1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIs8tMEJobf
主角想要被爱1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvqNG7FMXj2
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTTaIGwQSc6
男主卢克爱1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRYe5b9bNN6
主角就爱回去1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFmzNocmPHa
女主伊莎爱1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMhv2fHuGZq
主角就爱回去1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4kPrCRTlA8
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzhKBdMqhPN
想要被爱是佩姬的主题1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe43UTf9fOu
主角性别不是问题1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWtRnTxTkfi
内心冲突不是问题1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmQIcj7Eicq
主角被爱就迎刃而解1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVAOi3emmLm
看不懂这点整部书就看不了1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx8tuNhJbDn
妳的书乏人问津是这道理1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGYQXzB62X8
作者妳说主角口是心非1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlgcx2DWOAL
欸我说这不对1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkqlCyoHMwq
这明摆着口非心也非1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtBnYAS0QPo
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw5ysQXVbNQ
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0Y51BG7sep
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlHoX2cSWBp
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7pxwLxYNFs
为了被爱1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡahvLA92zeJ
连原本的性别都不要了1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl8mkAlVgXa
这主角疯的傻的1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxDJW0Lqd4d
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题

说说其它角色1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHwFdpRFffV
女主伊莎1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4b5ceXSI4Z
单纯的色鬼1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4qAJq4rYbw
作者您没讲可我猜应有病娇属性1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn3IxlQRcHg
黑化可能

艾德兰1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2vbGpuHqa4
可怜虫阿1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEl99i8ZZsc
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwftVRWj1Aj
妳说解释不够1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4idJ1XF4ZU
我到觉得清楚1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPUVYhqn1t6
这种事常见的阿

男主卢克才是那个写得不够1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiVVSxMFTN1
他为啥强1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSQchhODygn
妳啥都没讲1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxjzv9tMNAc
这才是问题

主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBVv41G5P0D
也是除主角外最明白的角色1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGXPggyx84I
她就拿来爱主角的1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmiVUE4LDhh
功能性角色

还有其他许多1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0muVRqZl6A
我就不提了

妳在作品裡回收的台词很多1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡf7ZWMZNN6k
可以瞧见妳的苦心1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSzbLRrx0RS
我觉得这没必要1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡb3s5C5DFQC
好的台词提一次够了1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUXLO4J9EIw
重提令人厌烦

妳说别的评文说设定不严谨1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC5dIwioFuq
我倒嫌设定囉嗦1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp183KXy18N
空白很重要1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtS0U5H4njQ
没明白有没明白的好处1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCLlrqCN42Q
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyAvHh8v7cn
这就够了

谢谢作者妳邀我看这书1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpv4jNeA2Kz
我还会继续看的1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡubHBvXWmjn
确实好看1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBEuIS8c1H4
希望你这能写完1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW7QAZ5H7ba
能放上起点不1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7i8Ck7fEa9
这样我也好跟亲友推荐

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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8VKVsXHT58
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，1039Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjvP3vJB0AV
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