作者妳好754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnOB8jkcmTH
受到妳的邀请754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1gDqeyBXsx
稍微看了下这本佩姬754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQM6TU9FPbZ
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLqj8vq5CAp
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAxClMNRedv
现世一堆东西754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBhe6NwcE4Y
其实就很简单一个道理754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDpf27VYCmK
主角想要被爱754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ98sS2RxiGV
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnIjGeSQ7Ep
男主卢克爱754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsxUI2f4eZI
主角就爱回去754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡavgzC2q36C
女主伊莎爱754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCxv0ihLMKy
主角就爱回去754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcbik3MaE1y
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSiBYN8ym63
想要被爱是佩姬的主题754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0Rc2gu8v6z
主角性别不是问题754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvBDGHjIr2F
内心冲突不是问题754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3l9A30RXQz
主角被爱就迎刃而解754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpgPFjvLaid
看不懂这点整部书就看不了754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ05qnvvD2Cg
妳的书乏人问津是这道理754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5zpOoG2OOF
作者妳说主角口是心非754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOkoFj3YlSo
欸我说这不对754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLLLFkeYTBH
这明摆着口非心也非754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUGqUoiLZui
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC93WLjHJr5
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuNW9qCEDJ8
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFgMJvFJvjo
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmfyUove12d
为了被爱754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxUXyLsYdwn
连原本的性别都不要了754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh8KZaD2wSm
这主角疯的傻的754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAKpK0RrgZ9
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3EAQ3VDJlF
女主伊莎754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9uLd9Ovwo5
单纯的色鬼754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjRtVDyHkcc
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZ7CMr8gURN
黑化可能
艾德兰754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqcNwW4rp4Z
可怜虫阿754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1AmFNrnAxZ
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcWuJHnWns2
妳说解释不够754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCQJaw7Mawt
我到觉得清楚754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrkMcvpF9No
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx34J6UexVl
他为啥强754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyKIQNlYMCT
妳啥都没讲754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTsWqXi0ZwL
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGEDmLbLdNY
也是除主角外最明白的角色754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHFGV9Ss2Ym
她就拿来爱主角的754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8k06oh9pt6
功能性角色
还有其他许多754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIALgiDqU6Y
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG4ZYKlrTEk
可以瞧见妳的苦心754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwNwTyWnM2P
我觉得这没必要754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCnG5ikUeOW
好的台词提一次够了754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbLPdbJPf73
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0eTh0H5ebm
我倒嫌设定囉嗦754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0mezQQj49y
空白很重要754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWa7TzUybbq
没明白有没明白的好处754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTDcFOHmr9m
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr1gfAhXb9i
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWc3VPP9Nm8
我还会继续看的754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5ygaAoQz1x
确实好看754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9ZD6tC5J5X
希望你这能写完754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR7f02snbrv
能放上起点不754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ5vy1otxt2
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoRbIRCbf03
作者回應：754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAXl63wsGrG
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡskq4haInvq
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6iPFdsC5kA
潛藏在文章中的祈願被人挖出來有稍稍一點害羞754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwmTM3mDbXS
感謝你的評文754Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡw7SJAsk8jJ
我會盡量把文章搬上對岸起點的
然後按「加至主畫面」