作者妳好779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWphLjtOcve
受到妳的邀请779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqwuLs4OEWm
稍微看了下这本佩姬779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnfbk8kXAGS
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq8vZQb38kJ
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOOohDHcfnN
现世一堆东西779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKJs0Apqtkh
其实就很简单一个道理779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡu5ztk5qqiw
主角想要被爱779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFtSLSrwRCQ
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiK9UuXFOZo
男主卢克爱779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUKMDuWPt0u
主角就爱回去779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1kCWSdfSRY
女主伊莎爱779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3NornChWMI
主角就爱回去779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡG73o4FcRtv
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuSsHJOK3Mr
想要被爱是佩姬的主题779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ305pNcQRx
主角性别不是问题779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLogpKdwS8b
内心冲突不是问题779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB1fBk94J90
主角被爱就迎刃而解779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiew713k2td
看不懂这点整部书就看不了779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXv4Jkyqs31
妳的书乏人问津是这道理779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjUeLDpdore
作者妳说主角口是心非779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHieynAOxks
欸我说这不对779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaxXfLLEaQa
这明摆着口非心也非779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZDtVSz6E3K
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1IDDx21i6J
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9YDN3Ku0ke
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAzFRbUjVVA
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4WhAkjCECp
为了被爱779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡa6lhoG5iKt
连原本的性别都不要了779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlLJWgpECRT
这主角疯的傻的779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsQK1WGvz2i
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB6rHGqBQEJ
女主伊莎779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDKQY3wPzic
单纯的色鬼779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡESGL74eE23
作者您没讲 可我猜应有病娇属性779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiEXZme780K
黑化可能
艾德兰779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhDETkAmSNi
可怜虫阿779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLqE5sqddBd
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq2KJvsaYxn
妳说解释不够779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8ghf0QFzMC
我到觉得清楚779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsgmojZW1hl
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡE5DvtTyBw7
他为啥强779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHeQjli5gTk
妳啥都没讲779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7FoiXYk5cP
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡikVV2U0gRZ
也是除主角外最明白的角色779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJKLy7iki3S
她就拿来爱主角的779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGpr9rCI889
功能性角色
还有其他许多779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFoEFlEReAr
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡl5h82aujRL
可以瞧见妳的苦心779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6UPMgNwFzA
我觉得这没必要779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡX18UYiAzAx
好的台词提一次够了779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4Tn4MkM5r4
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQTzN9aEZgW
我倒嫌设定囉嗦779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCU6kOOeChV
空白很重要779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhWAYqx3DCB
没明白有没明白的好处779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡS81cFMpxH1
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiDZ2v2LxWh
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHGHhmaWl0F
我还会继续看的779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFnAgbuPyCt
确实好看779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYVErTk8OnB
希望你这能写完779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLS4dOPOOr5
能放上起点不779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAMClaqvYME
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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作者回應：779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuDjzVXAMeH
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnax8fMf1Rf
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，779Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5nnr7eC6rf
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