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稍微看了下这本佩姬796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9SqufqcTOt
确实有意思
说说自己对这小说的看法796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgBjfAMDn9l
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡakjoC4bUrl
现世一堆东西796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzYlTjhKkIH
其实就很简单一个道理796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8yFALOFWfI
主角想要被爱796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGE5tvFedZn
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZaRrDnljC3
男主卢克爱796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZCsndg6L8h
主角就爱回去796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJd3Yg8nKxI
女主伊莎爱796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQouT5larqD
主角就爱回去796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡh4liixIKtt
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvnot9ltQZx
想要被爱是佩姬的主题796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtCAZocDF6h
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内心冲突不是问题796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWPhbGm2Xmt
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看不懂这点整部书就看不了796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtzTFlvGFhU
妳的书乏人问津是这道理796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡP9rnqTNrks
作者妳说主角口是心非796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBs5CmSvaee
欸我说这不对796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUf5txTXyKN
这明摆着口非心也非796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCttdVPhdBd
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWPsrhAyccL
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3HhX2qod6t
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLXj3PGFKkR
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvOvJZ61xJt
为了被爱796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7IIYZ4ZIZ1
连原本的性别都不要了796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5OztboAzKq
这主角疯的傻的796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQGb7a5tZID
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题
说说其它角色796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqYSrR61oGt
女主伊莎796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJTut4Dl1rd
单纯的色鬼796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvlUyXTpjKB
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黑化可能
艾德兰796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVNszZGS5CL
可怜虫阿796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJDVqOmazNT
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3ERF2KwMKE
妳说解释不够796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡADe7ulr8tn
我到觉得清楚796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0egJZve2ff
这种事常见的阿
男主卢克才是那个写得不够796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1TBgGcRzEa
他为啥强796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNiHdScYmhB
妳啥都没讲796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdQkN6i0grC
这才是问题
主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTfSOXcehP8
也是除主角外最明白的角色796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5fP8DBUFji
她就拿来爱主角的796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRVQgqiLff1
功能性角色
还有其他许多796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYmnDn8MIwX
我就不提了
妳在作品裡回收的台词很多796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡLE3jpLqc0O
可以瞧见妳的苦心796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxu6GEvxf7e
我觉得这没必要796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlCaG5zodcd
好的台词提一次够了796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4Z6ZdULLET
重提令人厌烦
妳说别的评文说设定不严谨796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡM0LwMDqmFp
我倒嫌设定囉嗦796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBXknuciXCu
空白很重要796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxDD7o1QQcb
没明白有没明白的好处796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRQ6cGec39y
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ925mymeZwp
这就够了
谢谢作者妳邀我看这书796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ2XWQpqfqP
我还会继续看的796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡY7x3TL9o7T
确实好看796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6X7OdonAWP
希望你这能写完796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxzFHsPqJxW
能放上起点不796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYIURorvkG8
这样我也好跟亲友推荐
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感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9iyf83449H
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，796Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8VQKTLEZpJ
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