願賭服輸,雖然嚷著要開空頭支票,還是來還願了。133Please respect copyright.PENANAcARBaLrsaC
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剛開始寫這篇的時候,發生了玖華的草稿被覆蓋事件,為防出事,便決定挑戰在打完全文前都不分頁,順便控制一下字數,不過後來還是忍不住先公開寫完的部分。133Please respect copyright.PENANA7LD3Q00lqW
133Please respect copyright.PENANACi1cnRINY4
稍微解釋一下,本篇故事建立在〈水月〉、〈灼曦〉、〈合符〉的刺殺事件之上——這三篇的「代理者」最後並沒有刺下去,而本篇劇情則是它們的平行時空,假設「代理者」刺下去之後,會發生什麼樣的事情。133Please respect copyright.PENANArwf5tz3zPB
133Please respect copyright.PENANAvK8NePkPIO
寫到快尾巴(剩不到一百字)的時候居然卡住超過一個禮拜,最後結算字數卻又跟預期的差不多,有種浪費太多時間的感覺。133Please respect copyright.PENANA6oICqHWBRe
133Please respect copyright.PENANAEExl3PPbYr
會卡的原因或許跟穿插了夏目漱石的《夢十夜》〈第一夜〉有關吧,這些段落(包含伏筆)並不在本來的草稿中,寫著寫著就自己亂入文章了;還好以角色設定看來,他們熟讀日本文學作品並不是件太奇怪的事(汗)。但為了故事架構的長久與穩定,下次得克制自己不要添加多餘的東西才行。133Please respect copyright.PENANAIhjwSbJq7q
133Please respect copyright.PENANATFCWtRhZJT
完成本篇後發現,由於置入《夢十夜》的部分段落,似乎導致閱讀難度增加,現在有點擔心沒看過《夢十夜》〈第一夜〉的人,會不會看不懂在寫什麼……133Please respect copyright.PENANAziRoUvWAkO
133Please respect copyright.PENANABeqQszJhyA
最後附帶一提,雖然《夢十夜》在網路上有很多版翻譯,但我覺得比較常見的幾個版本都沒有翻出原文的韻味;所以能力所及的話,建議一定要讀過日文,而且最好去讀原始版(舊字舊假名)。133Please respect copyright.PENANAoI9pALLD1K
133Please respect copyright.PENANAMC4uYHCRAj
以上,感謝諸君閱讀。
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