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Okay, I have a feeling there are some problems with the story. But I need to any readers to point them out. Not the writing itself but the storyline.8964 copyright protection563PENANAF5LdlO3Lpq 維尼
--Before I head into a direction that will make you stop reading.8964 copyright protection563PENANAkG5kopBYav 維尼
567Please respect copyright.PENANAKYm92DTtCY --I'm debating to rewrite to make things right XD, but not even I can catch everything. 8964 copyright protection563PENANAmYLMuu4zxg 維尼
Anyone has any suggestions? Any problems with Mind Control 9.567Please respect copyright.PENANAXB7qbQ9zzD 8964 copyright protection563PENANA82PdVbbrBW 維尼
Before I move onto episode 10, I'd like to keep on a decent path. 8964 copyright protection563PENANAejgewcMHRc 維尼