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Blog 1 - June 13th, 2016 FEEEDDD MEEE
ISSUE #6
Author: Alvin Atwater
Published:
Jul 28, 2016
Blog 1 - June 13th, 2016 FEEEDDD MEEE
Author: Alvin Atwater
Published:
Jul 28, 2016
ISSUE #6
Everything wrong with Mind Control Story 9.
No Plagiarism!Rmy8Ufw9EabgKYAGNOQtposted on PＥNAＮＡ

Okay, I have a feeling there are some problems with the story. But I need to any readers to point them out. Not the writing itself but the storyline.

--Before I head into a direction that will make you stop reading.

862Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaOe3JYjiRz
--I'm debating to rewrite to make things right XD, but not even I can catch everything. 

Anyone has any suggestions? Any problems with Mind Control 9.862Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbxk6k7B6e2

Before I move onto episode 10, I'd like to keep on a decent path.  

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