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Okay, I have a feeling there are some problems with the story. But I need to any readers to point them out. Not the writing itself but the storyline.8964 copyright protection561PENANAwohZ15qN2E 維尼
--Before I head into a direction that will make you stop reading.8964 copyright protection561PENANAQT9J4OO11v 維尼
565Please respect copyright.PENANAdIiY9Bx7Py --I'm debating to rewrite to make things right XD, but not even I can catch everything. 8964 copyright protection561PENANAz3TR9pQPxx 維尼
Anyone has any suggestions? Any problems with Mind Control 9.565Please respect copyright.PENANA3A6HDYscQ2 8964 copyright protection561PENANAvULfCHEwEf 維尼
Before I move onto episode 10, I'd like to keep on a decent path. 8964 copyright protection561PENANAItkiTaMnwr 維尼