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Blog 1 - June 13th, 2016 FEEEDDD MEEE
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作者: Alvin Atwater
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Jul 28, 2016
Blog 1 - June 13th, 2016 FEEEDDD MEEE
作者: Alvin Atwater
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Jul 28, 2016
篇 #6
Everything wrong with Mind Control Story 9.
No Plagiarism!zuFJvMr4vYuJEustHgEIposted on PＥNAＮＡ

Okay, I have a feeling there are some problems with the story. But I need to any readers to point them out. Not the writing itself but the storyline.

--Before I head into a direction that will make you stop reading.

750Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF2wZQk8UwF
--I'm debating to rewrite to make things right XD, but not even I can catch everything. 

Anyone has any suggestions? Any problems with Mind Control 9.750Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrCdMocGWWA

Before I move onto episode 10, I'd like to keep on a decent path.  

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