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讨论写小说问题
ENTRY #9
Author: 寒舞楪
Published:
May 25, 2021
讨论写小说问题
Published:
May 25, 2021
ENTRY #9
角色與描景
Author: 寒舞楪
Published:
May 25, 2021
1 Min Read
247 Words
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這個部分只是我個人的小小心得，歡迎討論。

先從角色開始，我自己在創造一個角色的時候，通常會把他描寫的很詳盡。

舉凡：名字、性別、好惡、個性、待人處事、穿著......等等。

由於很多人的作品是長篇為主，我其實很長看見，角色前後不一致，抑或個性偏掉的問題。

再來則是描景，很多人總會覺得，「景色越清楚越好。」，但其實我翻找很多資料後，發現，景物並不用寫得這麼詳細。

描寫景物的方式，應該是以，該景色之「特點」為主，而不是面面俱到的全部寫出來。

最後提一下視角，若是第三人稱，大部分人應該沒什麼問題。

但我很常看見，第一人稱為主的小說，突然視角跳到他人，這就不太合邏輯了。

當然，以下只是個人淺見，歡迎討論。

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