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Tingku Poetry 丁古詩作
ISSUE #196
Author: Tingku Tjarungan
Tingku Poetry 丁古詩作
Author: Tingku Tjarungan
ISSUE #196
畫出一片星空｜Paint A Starry Sky｜วาดท้องฟ้าที่เต็มไปด้วยดวงดาว
No Plagiarism!AdRd73zyq7pbWjSqxo8vposted on PＥNAＮＡ

你畫出一片星空

使我雙眼擺脫了朦朧

整片星空不只映入五花八門的星球

更多正反物質之間的連通

410Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMteXHDoXp0

我再畫一片星空

使你身軀不自覺律動

整片土地不只逃離深不見底的黑洞

無視來自四面八方的監控

410Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZbp8txsx9j

是原子就應該發生作用

否則辜負了持續膨脹的宇宙

¡Que descanses bien!（好好休息！）

⭐

我們與對方的星空，皆能成為奇妙的蟲洞，瞬間連動彼此。〈畫出一片星空〉是《CLOSE》裡最快寫完的，這速度真的讓我嚇到了，因為其他詩篇平均都要用好幾個小時來撰寫，甚至在做最後檢視與確認時又額外花費時間，當這篇用了十分鐘就寫好，我便感激所有人事物給了我效率、瞬間連通我想要的結果。雖然這是最快寫完的，但它搭配的歌與相關設計內容卻是糾結最久的，這癥結點在於是否「切題」。我當時預設在於由我出發來親近別人，可後來想想別人的親近也是種自我親近，因此決定收錄並作為很好的開場白。

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Tingku Poetry 丁古詩作
Poetry
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Last updated: Jun 26, 2026
Total word count: 66,042
Total reading time: 220 Minutes
原創 日常 現代 日記 生活 詩詞
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