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Tingku Poetry 丁古詩作
ISSUE #143
Author: Tingku Tjarungan
Tingku Poetry 丁古詩作
Author: Tingku Tjarungan
ISSUE #143
請給我整個世界 Please Give Me A Whole World
No Plagiarism!xIYf1FA029rVzfG1Us7Lposted on PＥNAＮＡ

適時地有些貪心

讓談心不變成嘆息

彙集了所有感性

就算失去許多彈性也會感激

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請給我整個世界

彷彿眼睛上了條眼線

有勇氣去面對各種危險

但也像加裝布簾

退縮時仍可安穩入睡

511Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAwmErIxIwB

請給我整個世界

對你模糊界線

對我沒有極限

第一次聽到這首歌時，雖然沒立即產生靈感，但因為編曲跟歌詞意涵曾有段時間在我腦海裡揮之不去，因此後來便創作出了這篇詩作。

就算外面的世界險惡，只要自己感到舒適，其實就是塊自由的天堂，可以讓我們大顯身手。

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Tingku Poetry 丁古詩作
Poetry
Prose
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Last updated: Jun 26, 2026
Total word count: 66,042
Total reading time: 220 Minutes
原創 日常 現代 日記 生活 詩詞
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