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Tingku Poetry 丁古詩作
ISSUE #104
Author: Tingku Tjarungan
Tingku Poetry 丁古詩作
Author: Tingku Tjarungan
ISSUE #104
落 Falling
No Plagiarism!aoe43Ob308phUQXiAcw9posted on PＥNAＮＡ

有掉落才感受到落差

有落差才記起悲傷

心從未一開始安穩地放下

而是爬上又不小心落下

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此刻除了悲傷也記起了慌張

接下來每一步踩踏前腳不自覺先搖晃

眼前的北極星是抓不到的理想

難怪搭船總是飄盪

｜509Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjFUrzo7C69

將得來的寶藏全數朝海丟下

那昏暗的視野會逐步淡化

        〈落〉是我寫過還滿好玩的作品，儘管寫的當下情緒不是特別穩定，不過回頭看看就能知道自己對許多事情是非常執著的，也害怕自己因結果不盡人意而一蹶不振，但還好最後是沒有。總之，別對一件事求過於執著。

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Tingku Poetry 丁古詩作
Poetry
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Last updated: Jun 26, 2026
Total word count: 66,042
Total reading time: 220 Minutes
原創 日常 現代 日記 生活 詩詞
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