This is still a WIP, so let me know if you have any suggestions! This is kind of a fantasy-romance kind of story, so comment down below if you have any ideas. Based loosely on Cinderella.
The day Hestia Embers was born, the royal palace burnt down. At first, it was a spark, but it soon evolved into a raging inferno, tearing through regions and destructing everything in its path.
The fire changed everything for her. She was abandoned by her parents, only to find herself adopted by two people who may not be as caring as Hestia thought.
The next thing Hestia knows, she finds herself caught in a web of distrust, agony, and love. He was the reason everything went wrong...
Asher Cohen is being stepped on by a horse. No, really. As the servant of the luxurious, royal Dupont family, he has to make sure everything is perfect. Even if it means no sleep at all.
Until the princess reappears. Cinder Dupont had been missing for the last 16 years, and when she's back, she's back.
When Cinder and Asher meet up, things could get a little... how do I put this? Dangerous. Especially when there's a fire involved.
Okay, that's planning to be my intro to the story. What do you guys think of the plot? Please give me some feedback, it would mean so much to me. Thank you!
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Of Cinders And Ashes is now published! Check it out here.
P.S. @StoryBandit tried to steal my work, and I will not stand for it. Readers, if you don't want your story plucked out of your hands, disable reader edits. Enabling it allows readers to access your edit page, thus being able to copy+paste your work. Act before it's too late! (Wrote this at 12:00 am, really sleepy, can't deal with ANY MORE DRAMA UNTIL LATER)448Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcLWcDONlFD
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