如何給小說埋設伏筆409Please respect copyright.PENANAqKnh4nbTY2
為了表述清楚和方便,做了個表格,希望對大家理解上有幫助。409Please respect copyright.PENANAwvuqylI2NN
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小說創作中,為了避免情節上的平淡,吸引讀者追看,我們通常都會使用到埋伏筆,設懸念的創作技巧,而為了使情節發展更加合理和豐滿,鋪墊也是必不可少的。409Please respect copyright.PENANAja69gtrP0K
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今天我們來講一講埋伏筆的技巧,下一次再講鋪墊的技法。409Please respect copyright.PENANAB1lWv2Ggls
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一、什麼是伏筆
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伏筆是文學創作中一種很常用的一種表現手法。409Please respect copyright.PENANApCAYlpehH9
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通常情況下,作者為了表現某段重要劇情,在先前便設置了相關的橋段或提示,這個提示,可以是人,也可以是物,甚至可以是一段對話,到故事進行到一定程度時,再將這個暗示揭示或者呼應出來,讓讀者恍然大悟。這便是伏筆。409Please respect copyright.PENANA7c2dMEJrkC
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二、寫小說一定需要埋伏筆嗎
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小說創作者,為了持續吸引讀者的注意力,通常都會埋設伏筆。可以這麼說,伏筆是一種重要的工具,能夠有意識的在故事中埋設伏筆,將為作品增色不少。409Please respect copyright.PENANAHj23EI99Ua
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但是埋伏筆的作用又具體體現在哪裡呢?409Please respect copyright.PENANA1BrJApjAU6
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從作品本身看,是為了避免劇情的突兀,增強合理性和真實性。409Please respect copyright.PENANA4r6wxPxymf
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避免劇情突兀,比起天降神兵的橋段,如果前面早已交代和徵兆,不但使邏輯上更加嚴謹,讀者也能更好的接受。409Please respect copyright.PENANA2cXH2Ewk2e
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比如,409Please respect copyright.PENANASKF5zBWGI6
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埋設一個人物的伏筆,一個辦事能力強但心腸極軟,經常幫助老弱婦孺的人,到最後被敵人用苦肉計騙過導致行動失敗,這樣就顯得很自然了。409Please respect copyright.PENANA05nJqPJfOB
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從讀者的角度來看,讀者其實並非是一定只喜歡埋了伏筆的小說,只是一種閱讀體驗的問題。409Please respect copyright.PENANAr8ZNBS55VH
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一般有經驗的讀者,把發現作者埋下的伏筆作為一種智力上的快感,如果後面的劇情確實如他們所料,這會為他們帶來充分的成就感。409Please respect copyright.PENANAiNeTwAi7hG
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若是讀者沒有發現作者早埋下的伏筆,到故事發展到關鍵地方才猛然醒悟,這樣的讀者會為被作者巧妙的設置拍手叫好,從而對該作品或者作者作出一個好的評價。409Please respect copyright.PENANAuJS0ehAOD4
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三、怎麼設置伏筆
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伏筆可以是一個人,一件物品,一個不經意的橋段或者一段對話。409Please respect copyright.PENANAMd686tL2VF
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人物和橋段,409Please respect copyright.PENANAXAd4ofwbb6
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比如《琅琊榜》中夏冬的丈夫聶峰這樣一個反復被提到但已經“死了”的人,最後卻起死回生。此處作者埋下的伏筆是,在山林中反復出現的野人,作者為什麼會描寫野人這樣一個與主線無關的劇情呢?原來野人就是多年前被謀害的赤焰軍前鋒大將聶峰。409Please respect copyright.PENANAgnlYoDIsmM
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物品,主角得到某個物品,這個物品剛開始並沒有展現出什麼特別的地方,許多人不以為然,但在後來力量強大,比如《傳奇》裡面的麻痹戒指。409Please respect copyright.PENANAuH3GWql2rU
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對話,比如需要換地圖的時候,一般會在換地圖前面幾章就提到那個地方的存在,而不會突然換。409Please respect copyright.PENANALjCnbjt92j
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因而我們可根據作品本身的情況挑選合適的人物、物品,設置一些橋段或者運用人物對話來埋設伏筆。409Please respect copyright.PENANAPJbC747vuq
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要設置伏筆,須對劇情走向有一個全盤的把握,這樣才能避免伏筆太多解決不了,或者忘記了埋下的伏筆。409Please respect copyright.PENANAaMDukqKlwM
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因而我們在寫小說大綱的時候,就要設置好伏筆點及什麼時候解決伏筆。409Please respect copyright.PENANArZ0FELjYIx
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四、埋設伏筆的注意點
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1.伏筆要反復強調409Please respect copyright.PENANAH7ysYIlYsL
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反復強調伏筆,讓讀者注意到這個地方的不同尋常之處,但又不馬上告訴讀者答案,引發讀者的期待。409Please respect copyright.PENANA0IaK0psC6y
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2.有伏必有應,且埋設和呼應不能脫離太久409Please respect copyright.PENANA6AgIFjECr0
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為避免情節前後矛盾,在關鍵的埋設伏筆處必須有對應的解決方式。伏筆的埋設,不要和伏筆的呼應脫離太久,這樣,讀者的記憶可能會消失,而失去了伏筆的意義;409Please respect copyright.PENANAV2XIrFVXt6
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3.不要讓伏筆單純當伏筆409Please respect copyright.PENANAEK90ndlWuU
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這一點是為了讓伏筆看上去不要那麼刻意,伏筆在文中還可承擔其他作用。409Please respect copyright.PENANATVKxkqWKPF
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描寫一個雨夜殺人的橋段,兇手出門特意挑了一把比較尖銳的雨傘,這把尖銳的雨傘是伏筆,當兇手用這把傘殺人的時候,雨傘成為了兇器,兇手殺完人離開,警方通過這把傘破了案,這把傘又成為了一個推動情節發展的點。409Please respect copyright.PENANA9cLncVI1hs
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4.伏筆不應過多409Please respect copyright.PENANALiVkTPNvYQ
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過多不同的伏筆,反而會讓讀者搞不清楚狀況,失去了伏筆的意義,除非是有連貫性的伏筆,做連續性的埋設;過度的買弄伏筆,也會讓故事的主題變的模糊不清。羽409Please respect copyright.PENANAbpF6QzV8NJ