Changing the prompt - It’s a yes from me

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Changing the prompt

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Changing the prompt

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Nov 28, 2020

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It’s a yes from me

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發布時間:

Nov 28, 2020

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At first glance, the prompt seemed okay but to truly say from the heart, I found it less 'edifying' about the story. It’s very unclear and straightforward, so I suggest you change it. Perhaps you could include a few dialogs, maybe a little extended back-story, or anything. But I table that you change it.ns 172.70.179.80da2

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