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互評大亂鬥
ENTRY #19
Author: 兀心
Published:
Dec 4, 2020
互評大亂鬥
Published:
Dec 4, 2020
ENTRY #19
評文 平凡｜拉拉
Author: 兀心
Published:
Dec 4, 2020
1 Min Read
263 Words
No Plagiarism!SHl7AEbybVdnH9gN7A2Oposted on PＥNAＮＡ

雖然看了序言而去找了些關於tera的文章來看，不過我也不是很確定有沒有必要為了一篇小說去找其致敬的遊戲來了解。

這感覺有點取巧吧。就因為故事致敬了某某事物，讀者就得連同故事外的東西一起納入閱讀中，但這並不屬於故事本身的內容，讀者也未必玩過該遊戲，作者可能得以「介紹全新世界觀」的立場來下筆，而非假設讀者知道該遊戲的背景設定。

所以，主角平凡是如何從兩手空空穿著睡衣到多了一根權杖、與阿克如何相遇，以及又是怎麼接受首次試煉和狼交手，這些經過必需要寫出來。至少在自殺後穿越到異世界與開始冒險之間要有個基本的轉場，哪怕只是丟出「OO年後」、「XX鐘頭後」來敷衍一下，都比一條分割線能夠說服讀者。

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