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互評大亂鬥
ENTRY #52
Author: But
Published:
Jan 18, 2021
互評大亂鬥
Published:
Jan 18, 2021
ENTRY #52
評文：《在神石墜落前，遇見您。》
Author: But
Published:
Jan 18, 2021
1 Min Read
160 Words
No Plagiarism!F4FyxOOPWxsXptkthFomposted on PＥNAＮＡ

結論：（抱歉，有點敷衍。）

１．劇情：

沒有與一般的言情小說的套路重疊，有自己的風格，但就我看到第十章的感想來說的話．．．很像是一杯水，有點平淡。

２．格式、分段：568Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ10VvdrawN8

這我沒挑出啥毛病，很整齊沒有亂掉。

３．標點符號：

你一般多用，

但我偶爾會看到一個,

一到十章共看到了兩次，多檢查一下比較好。

感想：

直接說就是一本合格的小說，不過在日常的片段多加點比較刺激或是搞笑的東西會比較好？

這點作者決定比較好。568Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqF040hyLQG

216.73.216.184

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