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以文易評。給我一篇文，我給你一篇...吐槽般的評論
ENTRY #50
Author: 青藍
Published:
Jan 25, 2021
以文易評。給我一篇文，我給你一篇...吐槽般的評論
Published:
Jan 25, 2021
ENTRY #50
《F/406》/青藍/未完, 約17500字
Author: 青藍
Published:
Jan 25, 2021
1 Min Read
230 Words
No Plagiarism!ZvY5mwpAie1oo15TO8Lfposted on PＥNAＮＡ

女主角素恩新搬到一個洋樓的單位而開始的故事，而且每晚都夢見同一個男子，而同時這男子在這個單位內發生過的故事亦被展開。316Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDwJYF5zJKn
這是一個關於前世今生的故事，以夢境穿插的故事。

是次故事開始已經說明這是一個前世今生的故事，沒有半點奇幻或驚慄，也許是一個很平凡的愛情故事。加上很久沒有寫過長篇小說，一直以散文寫作導致每章節似是快速完結，所以也想得到其他人的評語，看看應該如何改進。

先感謝你願意花時間看我的故事，是讚賞或彈劾都願意接受，只要是真誠的意見我都能接受。讓我在長篇小說的路上繼續進步吧！

https://www.penana.com/story/69245/f-406/316Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJMIaGzK5qv

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