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以文易評。給我一篇文,我給你一篇...吐槽般的評論
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以文易評。給我一篇文,我給你一篇...吐槽般的評論
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《日安!我們是綁匪,你被補了!》/星賊/未完結/目前字數約8500
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這篇是在描述女高中生小偷林若薇,在加入了全為犯罪者組成的「烏山鎮特殊巡邏隊」之後所發生的故事。這個故事是用輕鬆搞笑的風格來寫,裡面也會有打鬥場面。8964 copyright protection231PENANAv6OTb4LEII 維尼
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我自己還蠻喜歡這篇作品的,對話很活,在修稿的時候也會邊看邊笑。235Please respect copyright.PENANASKKUUXOYct
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希望禿鷹大大能夠盡量說出這一部作品的缺點!吸收作品的缺點並加以改進也是我這個創作新手在現階段唯一能進步的方法!235Please respect copyright.PENANAPVaC9z8WVe
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