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山野村夫的日常事
ISSUE #30
Author: 簡仲子
Published:
Nov 2, 2020
山野村夫的日常事
Author: 簡仲子
Published:
Nov 2, 2020
ISSUE #30
2/11
No Plagiarism!JHUmX89ib4w1HjlE37HKposted on PＥNAＮＡ

          我拿到之前課堂作好的作文，分數超出我的預算，而且老師的評語頗正面，講我用字雕琢，運用了大量比喻，開首優美。可是他說我的文有點曖味，「我」和「你」好像一對情侶，而非朋友，並且内容不夠豐富。

　　「欲窮千里目，更上一層樓。」我應該要做得更美好，超越這個成績，不然，我不會斷言放棄。

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