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薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
ISSUE #26
Author: 星羽
薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
Author: 星羽
ISSUE #26
愛貓：57字
No Plagiarism!C2g1AegziFJDejk0iJ7xposted on PＥNAＮＡ

放眼一看，鱗次櫛比，密密麻麻，高低不一的建築物盡在腳下。 女孩的雙手撩緊吊床的上方，雙腿懸垂於半空，感受風的流動。

（愛貓：57字）

好人卡：有意境，但宜可將女孩及建築物作出關連。

嵐靈: 女孩好寫意，但背景沒這寫意的感覺。

阿金：好有意境，再加多一，兩句寫佢望緊乜仲正。

古潮兒：修詞好正

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薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
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Last updated: Nov 16, 2020
Total word count: 34,225
Total reading time: 114 Minutes
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星羽
創作挑戰 作者 故事集 三十題 團隊創作 薯仔聯盟
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