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薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
ISSUE #8
Author: 星羽
薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
Author: 星羽
ISSUE #8
清流51字
No Plagiarism!hqj6B2yYdSyH5i6j1XGxposted on PＥNAＮＡ

沒有亞當夏娃的伊甸園，禁果向長毛象伸出獠牙。看不到眼睛，但感到它目光觸及所有生物，這是向神發起的挑戰。

(清流51字)

星羽：只係形容咗長毛象和蘋果，並不能確實地感受到當中的環境

宇樂：有待描寫更多景物和劇情

嵐靈:期待寫更多

愛貓：小鳥被忽視了(T ^ T)

好人卡：50字極限描述真喺好難呢XD 但單純從文字就已經感到一種壓迫感

古潮兒: 好像是小說前奏，留白的地方能令人產生大戰的聯想

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薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
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Last updated: Nov 16, 2020
Total word count: 34,225
Total reading time: 114 Minutes
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星羽
創作挑戰 作者 故事集 三十題 團隊創作 薯仔聯盟
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