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薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
ISSUE #10
Author: 歲紫歲紫
薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
Author: 歲紫歲紫
ISSUE #10
嵐靈：75字
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長毛象在沙漠上慢慢地走著，不知為甚麼會惹來碎碎念的大紅蘋果，還一邊跟著牠，一邊張咀說話。

因為大咀蘋果的關係，一堆鳥也開始圍上來。

長毛象完全沒理會，依舊低著頭走牠的路。

   (嵐靈：75字)

星羽：長毛象作主角，直缐性質的描述

宇樂：獨行大象俠，無視蘋果的存在

愛貓：勇敢的大象

好人卡：用大象角度描述幾新穎。「因為大咀蘋果的關係」<可以描述多少少點解佢會吸引到啲Tori圍上去

古潮兒: 能活用擬人法生動地描寫角色

清流：以長毛象為主角描寫，刻其心境，突顯了角色性格。

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薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
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Last updated: Nov 16, 2020
Total word count: 34,225
Total reading time: 114 Minutes
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創作挑戰 作者 故事集 三十題 團隊創作 薯仔聯盟
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