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《狂亂文字》互評挑戰！- 第八回
ENTRY #2
Author: But
Published:
Aug 18, 2020
《狂亂文字》互評挑戰！- 第八回
Published:
Aug 18, 2020
ENTRY #2
評:兀心,一個好像跟空調有關,但和殺手更有關係的故事
Author: But
Published:
Aug 18, 2020
1 Min Read
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No Plagiarism!HaS5i2zm60t9MADhw5r5posted on PＥNAＮＡ

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上篇的人已經把篇名和劇情都給講了，所以我就直接評論吧。

 我對故事整題評價很高，雖然有一串連續的對話沒有寫出是誰說的，但並不會讓人完全搞不清楚對話順序，中間的轉折更是令人驚訝，我沒想到想個人會是殺手，少年還不是普通人，接近尾聲的片段更是提到了"飛船"，讓人有遐想的空間。

整題而言，這部作品很棒，對於日常創作會埋伏筆的我而言，很OK~

172.70.100.133

ns 172.70.100.133da2
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