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月近畢星流走雨，拿開夢、也悁悁。
君語以愁渲，綠箋已可存。覺急忙、花落相聯。
不捨分離離後怨，我只是、淚無完。
穿鑿崱陂陀，蕙爐籥動初。讓金蟲、查定消磨。
發現綺疏花別看，推測著、後南柯。
實際沒如何，滯思便對和。我明明、不捨難梳。
為了等君歸雁錯，尋找怨、認清多。
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以新詩手法填兩首《唐多令》
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香港大學學生會文學院學生會中文學會《友文》徵文比賽——「捨」
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香港大學學生會文學院學生會中文學會《友文》徵文比賽——「捨」
Published:
Jul 13, 2020
ENTRY #19
<<唐多令(兩首).只是不捨>>
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霧飄山亭
霧飄山亭
Published:
Jul 13, 2020
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