I wrote this story for another publication and it didn't get accepted so here it is on here. What can I do to improve, is this really bad or just okay?8964 copyright protection1841ＰＥＮＡＮＡ0F5Y1fcPsJ 維尼

The story details the journey of boy who seeks to the power of magic, a skill lost to myth and forgotten by most. He's on an expedition to one of the last places of the old magical world, the Aion Temple.8964 copyright protection1841ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8GcqqBsPo7 維尼

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