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中學作品17/18創作天地投稿
ISSUE #4
Author: 青魔羯
中學作品17/18創作天地投稿
Author: 青魔羯
ISSUE #4
詩／詞
No Plagiarism!IrWmmRBNQP1FiSCauvG0posted on PＥNAＮＡ

季軍 - 舊傷痕555Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡn5eSPMOsqm

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每個人都有一段不想提及的過去

更不願讓別人知道自己的傷痕在何處

而你卻有意無意地在我面前多次提起

每句說話如箭般射進我的內心

往我痊癒中的傷口灑鹽

傷口劇烈的疼痛

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你一次又一次的打擊我打沉我

使我迷失了方向

不懂得什麼叫做堅持努力

你的話使我跌進深坑

也無力去尋找那光明的出口

別人給我拋下一條繩

我也無力去捉緊

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多少次想試探我的底線

而我的底線像無盡黑洞般

自己也不知道自己的底線在何處

我也想做一次反派的角色

代表我的內心對抗議

555Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6wjzLDZ1DO

也許你說得對

是我的價值觀錯

是我的態度不正確

是我的堅持放錯了地方

是我沒有努力過

也沒在你認為的事盡力過

555Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOxSPPCP2HR

但是人生難道真的有一本標準的教科書嗎

人生難道擁有標準答案嗎

難道不能有絲毫誤差嗎

如果人生真的擁有標準的教科書

那麼就是不屬於你的人生了

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堅持自己也許在別人眼中顯得格格不入

在這茫茫的大海中

總有一個碼頭讓你靠岸

岸上有與你志同道合的同伴

我深信

潘金英：作者的文字話裡有話，不妥協於「你」，特別強調自我看法，立意清晰！555Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpcz3mc5jt3

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中學作品17/18創作天地投稿
Fantasy
Short Story
School
Last updated: Apr 8, 2020
Total word count: 18,916
Total reading time: 63 Minutes
Writer:
青魔羯
本故事純屬虛構 如有雷同實屬巧合
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