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來讓我為你寫一首詩
ENTRY #13
Author: 弦月
Published:
Mar 4, 2020
來讓我為你寫一首詩
Published:
Mar 4, 2020
ENTRY #13
作品: 栽培
Author: 弦月
Published:
Mar 4, 2020
1 Min Read
184 Words
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栽培

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我為你灌溉

在黃昏與日月之間

等待，待你初芽

小心翼翼地保護

那通往成長的路

世間的風吹雨打

讓我以身相護

你懂便好，不懂也罷

只需以那剎那的

美麗來回應

如果凋零仍忍心敲響你的門

就讓我等待

下一個花季，下一次相遇

607Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeFcypZqIsT

備註: 這是一次很特別的體驗，也是我第一次為別人改詩，只好以我自己的理解去加強其中的敍述和感情。但我覺得作者所想表達的應該是一種較輕的情感，於是某些位置我選擇了直接改寫。好吧，就先這樣，感謝圍觀

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