(1) 排版太密麻麻，看了超過三十行字還沒分段，讓人沒心機 / 耐性看下去。
(2) 語句太長，不善用標點，閱讀會很困難。
(3) (小說) 過多說教，作者太想將自己的觀點灌輸給讀者。
(4) (小說) 背景或心理描寫過多，而不是以趣味性的情節表達，會讓讀者覺得沉悶。
(5) (小說) 前言不對後語，角色性格前後矛盾，但又沒解釋為何有如此轉折。
特別是第 (3) 點，不知道大家有沒有同感呢？
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