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那些雷到你的寫作習慣
ENTRY #13
Author: win.crafter
Published:
Feb 1, 2020
那些雷到你的寫作習慣
Published:
Feb 1, 2020
ENTRY #13
太喜歡說教！
Author: win.crafter
Published:
Feb 1, 2020
1 Min Read
145 Words
No Plagiarism!Qc1II6UHlLx6ngdIbegwposted on PＥNAＮＡ

(1) 排版太密麻麻，看了超過三十行字還沒分段，讓人沒心機 / 耐性看下去。

(2) 語句太長，不善用標點，閱讀會很困難。

(3) (小說) 過多說教，作者太想將自己的觀點灌輸給讀者。

(4) (小說) 背景或心理描寫過多，而不是以趣味性的情節表達，會讓讀者覺得沉悶。

(5) (小說) 前言不對後語，角色性格前後矛盾，但又沒解釋為何有如此轉折。

特別是第 (3) 點，不知道大家有沒有同感呢？

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