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電影小說徵文比賽：「飲食篇」
ENTRY #10
Author: 櫻雪（瑛蕎）
Published:
Feb 25, 2020
電影小說徵文比賽：「飲食篇」
Published:
Feb 25, 2020
ENTRY #10
結語
Author: 櫻雪（瑛蕎）
Published:
Feb 25, 2020
1 Min Read
234 Words
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十分感謝大家

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慶子的文章

第一篇小說來講很強了 但分段不用太多 你一直用逗號可以先把句子連起來 部分作者的感覺有點點太出 像有個旁白一直在說話 有部分寫得不錯

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全篇文 超好看 一寫到室內環境描述成個文筆好似勁左幾層 睇得出作者好了解個設計467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuHa9ua2MoQ

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女主很萌萌地 劇情超甜蜜蜜  個尾雖然很快估到但做到個遺憾效果467Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNhD06KvSfm

介鶴吉的文章

表面很日常的文章漸漸出營造恐怖氣氛 描述正常生活的部分比較急 文章中段劇情很快就開始一起吃肉 被打昏的過程 我認為前半部分再鋪排多一兩段女朋友的正常 然後帶到這部分的劇情  更加可以顯得出女友的異常

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