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《狂亂文字》互評挑戰！- 第零回
ENTRY #2
Author: 亡魂之筆
Published:
Dec 28, 2019
《狂亂文字》互評挑戰！- 第零回
Published:
Dec 28, 2019
ENTRY #2
自評 《狂亂文字》 2019-07 《只武》一作
Author: 亡魂之筆
Published:
Dec 28, 2019
1 Min Read
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No Plagiarism!lPJXQlY6DcnKgM9D98q8posted on PＥNAＮＡ

數月後，回望數月前的文章，感覺有些怪異。可能是我的文筆稍稍進步了，或是我再看文章時的角度不同，總感覺重寫時可以將角色的模糊感帶出得更好。但始終是自己的心血，還是感覺不太差。

對於神態的捕捉可以再下一些功夫，希望以後的文章可以做到吧

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