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碎片詩歌文集
ISSUE #11
Author: 與築
碎片詩歌文集
Author: 與築
ISSUE #11
【第一季結束】對最近練詩的一點想法
No Plagiarism!7gVkQn5kVYNuIj55KvfBposted on PＥNAＮＡ

其實我之所以寫這些詩，主要是因為我要增加作品集的作品數目，所以我才會花三天的時間把十首詩「飆」出來。我四處尋找網友評詩，但是好像網友怕會打擊我所以都不敢幫我評詩，只有一個中文系碩士生給我一點建議。我至今才發覺原來尋找批評的人這麼難找，那麼想必這世界善良的人還是比較多吧？不過因為是很正經的尋求評論，所以我內心是失落的。假如我真要圖個虛榮，我根本不會找人批評我的詩歌。

不過由於我想要的文案工作已經徵到人了，所以製作作品集的部分似乎也不用這麼趕，所以就是我日後會多看一些詩集，以及好好思考詩要怎麼寫，才不會很倉促的寫了連自己都覺得很彆扭的東西。

總之還是希望能夠接受大家長期的批評，我今後也會努力的！

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碎片詩歌文集
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Last updated: Sep 25, 2019
Total word count: 3,279
Total reading time: 11 Minutes
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與築
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