個故終於寫完喇，應該係我寫咁多篇故最唔舒服同心寒嘅故仔，可能係同依家香港政治同社會氣氛有關。有唔少人物同故事設定係改咗，原本伊臣項友個角色無咁衰格，諗住寫得有少少悲情。不過真係寫唔出… 358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjY7LrlxBrv
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文毅同舊故殺人要填命嗎男主一樣係啞嘅，原本係有特別意思嘅，但我一寫到項友伊臣條線，好似將個文毅男主邊緣化咗少少。仲諗住想寫佢寫得深入啲，可能自己水平唔得就寫到唔湯唔水。Dia又係一樣，除咗最後揭露佢真正身份，佢好似存在感唔太強，連另一女角台主蔚藍仲搶鏡過佢。 358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡejpgQ9EA0I
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個結局有諗過好唔好寫死女主角Dia，我係想文毅送佢去醫院後，Dia就響醫院消失生死未卜，咁樣令到個ending無咁慘。不過諗過諗過，消失結局好似令Dia個角色行為有少少前後不一咁款…(雖然個故有唔少角色行為前後不一咁樣) 358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ39SIOrzNw6
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另一女角台主蔚藍上年寫嗰陣係無嘅，係響今年重新寫番突然諗到。本來諗住係等我同睇緊嘅讀者一見到佢，有得紓緩個故悲情氣氛。唔知做乜台主一出場，成個故爭啲失控咁滯，我一寫佢就慶！搞吓搞吓我決定整鬼個台主，惡趣味、嘔心同佢個下場我專登寫到有咁衰得咁衰。(不過幫伊臣個黑警都唔方好人)。 358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcC8OWNpob0
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故中故殺手無夢條Ruby線係我上年原本想寫嘅科幻故事，但係諗唔掂，索性同呢篇故二合為一。對殺手無夢篇故中故我唔係幾咁滿意，最後同Ruby大戰我好似寫衰咗有啲草草了事，太大格局可能我都係寫唔好。 358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡXrfRQrbNZ3
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之後會唔會再出新故呢？俾少少時間我。 358Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFK6WgXlSnT
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