四月是你的謊言,我深深相信沒有宅宅們不懂吧?342Please respect copyright.PENANAdvKoP6AJ3H
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身為動漫製作公司A-1 Pictures的五大招牌之一,也是歷年的催淚神作之一。342Please respect copyright.PENANAnq6NqsjdQ7
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其知明度真的可以說是A-1作品最高的~雖然前方有刀劍神域在,後有不起眼女主角培育法罷了~順便一提我最喜歡的動漫就是不起眼女主角培育法~它的13本小說加FD和Girls Side1-3我都買了三套,分別用作自看,傳教和收藏~!BD兩季也是買全套限量版!342Please respect copyright.PENANAf2qf7pK7aB
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既然決定了參賽小說就用四月是你的謊言,那就避不開要從開認真的看一篇四月是你的謊言(漫畫版)了,師父是這樣跟我說的。。然後拿了11本漫畫集來給我。。。她說只是問friend借的,要看快一點!但她又不肯告訴我是誰借給我的!!!又賣關子。。。342Please respect copyright.PENANAq6hLInvlio
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我並不是四月的Fans,而且我看TV版也沒有哭,只能說是一部不過不失的催淚向作品。男主在母親去世後,失去了彈鋼琴的能力,最終放棄了鋼琴彈奏。過了三年後認識了天才女主角,女主角慢慢一步一步部男主走出對鋼琴和母親的迷惘,重新成為強大的鋼琴家。但取而代之的是女主的病情一直沒有好轉。。在男主的一次比賽中死去的,我還記得當時男主用演奏的音樂令氣氛推向最高潮和女主在空中演奏起來。最後用女主的遺書表白和解釋講謊言是什麼一回事,鏡頭一轉下年的四月說出『沒有你的四月已經到來』成功點題四月是你的謊言。342Please respect copyright.PENANANgEM9Uet8s
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無可口非,TV版的質素可以說是2015年動漫界最頂級的作品~有人說很感動,亦有人是不外如事。這就是催淚向的缺點。342Please respect copyright.PENANAiO1JCW1lmR
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算了,都是快點看完吧~我還要做大綱的!動畫版我沒有哭,漫畫版也一定沒事的!342Please respect copyright.PENANArUUdaaLMxK
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——三天後~地點學校——342Please respect copyright.PENANAwaj7JNjoye
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「你看完了嗎我們今天要開會了喔?喂!徒弟君你無事吧。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAxtJxlY8KyS
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「哦~師父你好呀!什麼我有沒有事呀?」342Please respect copyright.PENANAfQX86y8Aaf
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「你的臉色很色很差呀。。別跟我說你無事。。叫我怎樣相信。。?」342Please respect copyright.PENANAFZOFbb2s8l
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「是嗎。。那我應該怪罪於你嗎?」342Please respect copyright.PENANAtUKF126s0o
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事情是這樣的!我一直不相信漫畫可以做到成功的催淚向作品,原因很簡單~在我心中一部成功的催淚作品並不是靠人設,不是靠劇情,而是靠一首好好聽的BGM(背景音樂)為基本!以日本催淚神作之一「我們仍未知道那天所看見的花名」和2017年催淚代表作「末日時在做什麼?有沒有空?可以來拯救嗎?」為例,它們可以引起觀眾流淚的要素除了前後的劇情鋪排外,最成功,最主要的一定是BGM的「Secret base」和「Always in my heart」的歌曲引為觀眾的情緒!我們不一定以動漫作品來對比,我以再以Gal game為例,丸戶老師(賊)曾經在「白色相簿2」講座和他的其中一部大作品「不起眼女主培育法」小說中提過,一部成功與失敗的作品,只有一線之差,可能你作品中的劇情已經是最好,人設、角色畫面已經是最好,那你的作品欠缺的就是最優質的背景音樂了。所以在我心中一部催淚作品成功與否其中一個因素絕對就是BGM了!也因為如此,我一直否定沒可能有BGM的漫畫是做不到出色的催淚作品!342Please respect copyright.PENANAyCvet7qrZs
說了那麼多,我當然不是說「四月是你的謊言」的BGM做得不好!四月的BGM可以說是動漫界的頂點之一,但是呀~四月就是電不中我的腦電波~我就是沒有哭出來呀!所以我抱著相同的心態看了漫畫版~我以為一定沒有事的~342Please respect copyright.PENANAwqaQlYrJWo
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是的。。。。我以為我不會哭的。。。。。。。。。342Please respect copyright.PENANAWcbre0StFT
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「所以你看完哭了出來就是了嗎?」342Please respect copyright.PENANADUSaCwNlUA
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這聲音的來源不是師父,是一把些少陌生的聲線,好像曾經聽過一次!342Please respect copyright.PENANApeOJIHfi86
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沒錯這熟悉的場面裹,聲線的女主人當然就是我們的『第二』女主角Alice大小姐啦!!!342Please respect copyright.PENANAjimiC5As4r
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「你又是為什麼知道的啦!!!!Alice小姐!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAfpVFTDGsC4
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「唉。。我求你用下腦袋想清楚才問吧!學校除了我外,還會有誰好心借漫畫給你呀??」342Please respect copyright.PENANAhzhVqgSqEh
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「其實這個我有考慮過是不是你借給我的。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAMfuOike6y0
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「吓。。那你還問什麼?白痴嗎?算了先不追究這了。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAtiYS0h6asz
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「Alice你來B班還有其他事嗎?」342Please respect copyright.PENANAdCy5OkAucB
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「當然啦!看完我的收藏級漫畫當然要有用後感想和得著啦!!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAzWUDLdvQ1i
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「是嗎?我看完也沒什麼感覺,毫無感情波動!更沒有任何得著!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAFMpVdscxha
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不知道為何,我看到她的樣子,語氣和態度後,我真的忍不住要串她一頓!!真~的~不~知~道~為~什~麼~喔~!342Please respect copyright.PENANA7IhJsFm3t1
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「你。。。。你浪費了我重新看多一次的時間!!把時間都還給我!!人渣Thomas!!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANA8uU3IDGmkF
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「你還是把真心話告訴她吧~那女子對這方面很報著的!」師父輕聲的在我耳邊輕訴342Please respect copyright.PENANA4jYKmdQn7s
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我被兩位女性圍攻了嗎?我該投降了嗎?應該要了。。342Please respect copyright.PENANA7B2A9bk8NE
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「好了!好了!我是有心動了啦!也有得著了啦!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAZJ1l3pH1t5
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她們兩人聽到後面容大幅扭轉了。。所以說女生真的難以推測。。。342Please respect copyright.PENANAsG1oJWYRLw
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「真的嗎??感想~感想~!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAflMP81WjNQ
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「有什麼得著??可以要在小說裏嗎???」342Please respect copyright.PENANA0nz9VXt5Wa
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同一時間,兩個女生,兩條問題,你會答誰先?342Please respect copyright.PENANAbd8TwJQRfS
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『當然是師父先啦!!!還需要問嗎?』342Please respect copyright.PENANAYE3s6c9f4M
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「得著嗎。。?由於這是短篇小說,所以我認為我們要大幅修改劇情!」342Please respect copyright.PENANA5UYJAr9vqs
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「是嗎?那應該修改什麼?四月的內容其實不長啊!」342Please respect copyright.PENANA5C81tpwDAx
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「那到底感想如何???」342Please respect copyright.PENANA1aLDa5BaWN
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「我認為劇情冇需刻意描寫男主和母親之間的事,將悲傷的陰影位置,完全描寫成一個溫馨的家庭故事,不!應該說男主沒有和母親發生過衝突的設定,單純說是成為了不想記起母親離世的記憶而避開鋼琴就可以了!故事應該要突出男女主的互動!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAAlbfFyNyZX
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「還有我要澄清我不是認為四月裏男主的陰影是多餘!!只是不適合在這次的短篇小說細說!因為男女主發生的事才是四月的主線,我不想放太多字數在母親上!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAYIc9DSBSWw
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兩人聽到後都啞口無言,如何?看到我對小說劇情的編寫能力了嗎?哈哈哈!342Please respect copyright.PENANAIccRiUoAfF
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「總覺得很無聊的故事~好像故事失去了內涵。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAghTL08poQJ
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「Alice你也是這樣想嗎?我也是啊!」342Please respect copyright.PENANA7k7Ae4umcy
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你們兩個。。。你們要記得這是短篇小說喎!!342Please respect copyright.PENANA1UH6kkUtUR
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「我知道這是短篇小說,但這絕對不是隨意刪除重要劇情的藉口!」342Please respect copyright.PENANA9qPA1jsuaS
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「無錯無錯!女主令男主擺脫母親籠罩的陰影才是四月的主線,刪除了好像會引起前後的矛盾!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAWiUIQM4u40
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她們說得一點也沒有錯,其實我也有想過這是令劇情變得膚淺的陷阱,不過比起日後絕對會造成影響的字數限制,我不得不想出一個可以解決的方法!而最簡單的方法就是刪除另一條主線,總之就是將男女主的互動變成重點,只是將男女主角的設定修改,就可以了!342Please respect copyright.PENANAlfOicVmUkB
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「其實未嘗不是一個方法!我們有時間去修改!這只是初步的構思!!比起一定超過字數,等死的做法,這一定是更好的認對方法!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAAa42PIQ5OY
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「你也說得並非沒有道理。。明明只是個廢物宅男。。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANA9Tg1TkcLlM
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「嘿!我果然沒有選擇錯人~」342Please respect copyright.PENANA2rspG9eMue
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「那另一條問題來了?書名是什麼?這部分會佔分的,而且要解釋的!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAnYZORcOXnP
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。。。。。。342Please respect copyright.PENANAPvqdvQ6040
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「是嗎?不可以直接「四月是你的謊言」嗎?」342Please respect copyright.PENANA4868V2H7oH
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「。。。。。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAyP8oL6aXqz
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「。。。。。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANA1f9DkhAEJi
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「。。。。。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAijAd0D49Rq
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「果然是個廢物宅男。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAQMWfRiJCon
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「不是吧。。。我們只是參考罷了。。劇情仍然要自創的!!當然要有全新的書名啦!!!白痴!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAkkvOSTQ7PT
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「兩位大小姐對不起!!!小弟會在放學前想到的!!請再給予小弟一點時間!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANANlfUMnAlsu
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「好吧~放學前完成不了你就死定了!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAiuAgsIPRRp
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「放學的話不關我事了~我的學會今天有活動~Chloe你加油了~!」342Please respect copyright.PENANASHSw7Ro9xY
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「到底你是什麼學會。。到現在我還不知道呀!!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANA8UxKVZtWrM
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「吓。。你還不知道?!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAEuvPm9abzH
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「你。。。你真的是個廢物。。連腦袋也沒有。。真的!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAmxRksbzPo0
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對不起囉!我得罪你嗎??一直對我人生攻擊!!我不是抖M(被虐待狂)的!!342Please respect copyright.PENANAV6vc8zV5Ca
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真的不是!!!342Please respect copyright.PENANAk7uMLUVQGQ
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~~~放學後~~~342Please respect copyright.PENANA7shbgYYgMF
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「好了徒弟君~你有方案了嗎?小說的書名~」342Please respect copyright.PENANA9RodbpzKM7
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問得好。。。我想不到。。。342Please respect copyright.PENANAoO4D1Qzxe2
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「我有認真想過,不過感覺不適合小說內容就是了~」342Please respect copyright.PENANAzguSCIe5w2
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「那是說你有方案了啦!快說說來聽!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAHLnGD49DBE
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好一個斷章取意!!會寫小說的人就是喜歡我行我素?342Please respect copyright.PENANAKcggzX6boI
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不過~其實我不是沒有的,但只是一直不合心意呀!你要知道一個好的書名是可以貫徹整個小說的,不論是任何類型的作品,我們創作者的第一關,我們的共同敵人就是一個好的書名!!所以請容許我再三思一時!!!342Please respect copyright.PENANAY82sCvcoG7
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「別呆了在此!快點確定小說書名!!還是你根本沒有想過?快點!我們很趕時間的!今天我們還有地方要去的!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANA6Aq2B9mbJL
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「我不是沒有想過啦!你覺得《世界仍有新事,你我再沒故事》如何?我可以快速簡單講解書名含意的!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANA4sofFtdWq0
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我聽到師父焦急的樣子後,我也迫不得意要指明(快速講解)這詞語!!還有我們一陣還有地方要去嗎??我怎麼沒有聽說過?342Please respect copyright.PENANAfBKYFMozpL
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「ok,快解釋為何用這種名稱吧~意思有點蒙糊!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAO6XbV3lS9s
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「所以我就是說我想得不夠好喔!!我也覺得太蒙糊,不過意思其實不難解的!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAx5X8bad1Xt
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「好!!快說吧,我在聽的!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAK2KwzoSOCm
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「呼,書名分成三部分,你我就是解男女主角,這非常容易吧?再沒故事就是Bad Ending的涵意,世界仍有新事,這是一個伏筆,這是我想的故事裹,結局會和這句話互相連係!就是這樣!我知道我寫故事文筆不好,沒有內涵,想必然書名也沒有實力可言!!請師父必需更正不足之處!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAipFttlKrGY
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「明明我什麼也沒有說。。。我也沒有話書名不好。。。不用說那麼公式的說話吧。。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAp60GpG2hd6
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「我一定會有很多不足之處的!!師父請狠心指正!我想將我的第一部作品寫得更完美!!師父可以多加指正!真的!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANA5MAjHshoVp
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「傻啦~現在更加不能隨意修改你的想法!我沒有話過這書名不好,我只是想聽聽你對書名的重要性是如何定意罷了~書名不錯,有一種胡弄玄虛的感覺,是很好的書名,你做得不錯~真的。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAhW1Khd9mgj
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「是嗎。。我還以為你對書名是十分追求完美。。」342Please respect copyright.PENANAjW2YbICByP
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「這些只從標題中尋找合自己心意的人,才會陷入標題黨的陷阱!我們不應該刻意去改書名,因為苦心想第一個想到的書名才是最接受創作者最想在小說裹表逹的~才是最真心的想法,最扣題的!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAjOp5uoAhCB
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原來是這樣。。第一個苦心想到的,才是最真實的~我又要抄下筆記了!342Please respect copyright.PENANAgeY47FAHpf
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「那書名就決定用《世界仍有新事,你我再沒故事》,我還有一個請求,我想你把這本短篇也放到網上連載,這對你日後寫小說一定會有幫助的,所以這就是命令!!」342Please respect copyright.PENANAbWq0xEUsqj
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It is the Order,好!你都說到那樣,我也沒有選擇權了吧~!342Please respect copyright.PENANAROawAfAB8r
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「好的。。。你晚上把網站鏈接send給我,我會解決的了~」342Please respect copyright.PENANAn5NQ3ZDgnR
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幾經少少的「風波」,我們總算把書名和內容都確定了,實在可喜可賀~可喜可賀~342Please respect copyright.PENANAxSR0rGIbaG
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《輕小說》無天份輕小說作者教協法
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ISSUE #12
第九話: 新作
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《輕小說》無天份輕小說作者教協法
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Last updated: Aug 4, 2019
Total word count: 22,403
Total reading time: 75 Minutes
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