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最末屆 宋詞挑戰 詞牌即題
ENTRY #4
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Jun 10, 2019
最末屆 宋詞挑戰 詞牌即題
Published:
Jun 10, 2019
ENTRY #4
《如夢令.夢心嘆》
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Jun 10, 2019
1 Min Read
108 Words
No Plagiarism!AtsWAWzJ9MGpce0efZAxposted on PＥNAＮＡ

再來一首><…

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夢醒玉蟲翲散，星點揚焆璀燦。

獨自又依欄，只想盼君歸返。

心嘆 心嘆。

夢裏無聲飛雁。

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還是不好說…

簡單來說前2句為夢醒之景，續2句為動作與心情，後3句為回憶夢中…

解字:玉蟲:即燈火，翲:即飛散，此指燭煙飛散，揚焆:即明亮，此指夜星明亮催燦。

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寫得差還請見諒！

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