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[專題][聊天室][評文服務]熊仔麻辣米線館
ENTRY #25
Author: Minz月月
Published:
Jun 14, 2019
[專題][聊天室][評文服務]熊仔麻辣米線館
Published:
Jun 14, 2019
ENTRY #25
<首單>露娜仙仙大廚!請來一份大辣仙菜米線
Author: Minz月月
Published:
Jun 14, 2019
1 Min Read
134 Words
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請求點評作品:788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrZ9id0V1TQ

葛諾瑞之眼--第一章~第七章788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV8V4sYcqYH

指定大廚:

露娜仙仙788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5HF2w5ciWJ

辣度:788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpGAGfvlDlF

大辣。月月吃得下，真的!....(吧)788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOemUFWsbKg

額外加配:

麻辣皮蛋788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGClybczZso

回饋:788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTaUSuae5Jp

仙仙下單的兩篇文，月月不擇一了，兩篇都喜歡點滿也評滿:D788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡz3y9szVRqE

註:

錯字和排版，最後修文會修正，仙仙不用費神幫月月抓字蟲OUO788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNwq7zd5cRb

希望有一些敘事筆法的建議((總覺得後面敘述有越來越多的趨勢，但不知道如何刪減QWQ788Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZx3ZlDneo0

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