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[專題][聊天室][評文服務]熊仔麻辣米線館
ENTRY #25
Author: Minz月月
Published:
Jun 14, 2019
[專題][聊天室][評文服務]熊仔麻辣米線館
Published:
Jun 14, 2019
ENTRY #25
<首單>露娜仙仙大廚!請來一份大辣仙菜米線
Author: Minz月月
Published:
Jun 14, 2019
1 Min Read
134 Words
No Plagiarism!2NltRk26nsWCzlrgtSBZposted on PＥNAＮＡ

請求點評作品:790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOW80ICxYIW

葛諾瑞之眼--第一章~第七章790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtVvpeGt5bE

指定大廚:

露娜仙仙790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHkzts3PJmk

辣度:790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmF600Rfd7V

大辣。月月吃得下，真的!....(吧)790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdZPke5eMD1

額外加配:

麻辣皮蛋790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR0fSWaRBG0

回饋:790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡad4z4ArMn0

仙仙下單的兩篇文，月月不擇一了，兩篇都喜歡點滿也評滿:D790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW8mzISngIv

註:

錯字和排版，最後修文會修正，仙仙不用費神幫月月抓字蟲OUO790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwyxLuwl9jl

希望有一些敘事筆法的建議((總覺得後面敘述有越來越多的趨勢，但不知道如何刪減QWQ790Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6lDIou5jJ4

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