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古風回文句/詩/詞小挑戰(第2屆)
ENTRY #5
Author: 子昳
Published:
May 2, 2019
古風回文句/詩/詞小挑戰(第2屆)
Published:
May 2, 2019
ENTRY #5
心傾少年(年少傾心)
Author: 子昳
Published:
May 2, 2019
1 Min Read
268 Words
No Plagiarism!bjNCjdV0lAniIjvvqiLdposted on PＥNAＮＡ

我想這是個沒有格律的古風詩吧。

要說是古風句，也可以。

採取倒讀式的回文(題目亦然)

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淺雨夢亭山，深情染墨夜。
愁消落花，嘆笑幽幽。心予誰?諾予誰?
日日想念，終伴君與願。

《解》:淺淺的雨夢見那亭那山，我對你的情深染黑了夜。

心裡的愁情在落下的花中消散，忍不住幽幽的苦笑嘆息。

我的心給了誰?承諾又給了誰?

每天都在想念，想念的內容是你——我的願望。

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782Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvuAWA5y7lH

夜墨染情深，山亭夢雨淺。
誰予諾?誰予心?花落消愁，幽幽笑嘆。
願與君伴終，念想日日。   

《解》:黑夜如墨，染深了我的感情，連遙遠的山亭也夢見了雨淺淺的下。

是誰承諾了我?是誰給了我他的心?

花落下，也消去了我的哀愁，最後只有幽幽的一句笑嘆。

我希望與你相伴直到終老，每日都在想。

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不怎麼專業，大家看看就行。

歡迎點評。

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