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翻找了過去
ISSUE #1
Author: 不足。字
翻找了過去
Author: 不足。字
ISSUE #1
一個男主角很白目的故事
No Plagiarism!1dyVde4BVYk7YLnY0hTKposted on PＥNAＮＡ

在一個本子裡我找到以前寫的超短篇小說，嫩嫩的感覺啊~(而且是沒有完結的那種)

((我發現自己超喜歡用狀聲詞的~(*≧∀≦*)

那時候看來有很多不會的字和錯字~o​​​​​​​（*´▽`*)o而且不得不吐槽一下不符合邏輯的地方，

女主角.她....被絆倒兩次？？智商還在嗎？第二次應該就會留意到又伸出來的那隻腳了，可以避開的不是嗎？

還有男主角的人設也很奇怪，一下子說他是熱心的，可後來為什麼又用自己的腳絆倒女主？╮(╯ω╰)ﾉ

然後呀~女主角去的那一班太學霸了吧，70分就已經是〝爛〞的程度了...(っ*´∀｀*)っ464Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOlpW8jHXjk
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真不知道那時候在想啥~哈哈~

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Last updated: May 25, 2019
Total word count: 2,346
Total reading time: 8 Minutes
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