1. Entry one was written in such a professional way. I felt immersed in the world and the writing. I only wished there was more! Great music to go with it.
2. Entry two was quite adventurous and the descriptions were so spot on, I loved getting to know the characters and the world around them. The robot aspect was incredible! I loved the urgency behind the writing. It was well done.
3. Entry three was very good. I loved the characters very much and the way they interacted with each other. The writing was really good and I could feel every emotion and see the scenes as if they were a movie.
Great job all! Sophia and I really enjoyed reading all of these entries. I hope to make a new contest soon, so be on the lookout ^_^
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