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《A20特工前傳》讀後感寫作
ENTRY #6
Author: 凌茉
Published:
May 18, 2019
《A20特工前傳》讀後感寫作
Published:
May 18, 2019
ENTRY #6
小建議
Author: 凌茉
Published:
May 18, 2019
1 Min Read
227 Words
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氣氛營造的十分成功，場景設定明確，這點值得讚許。

但我認為看小說最重要的部分是必須要讓讀著的腦中有「畫面」，如果你的作品能能夠讓讀者們身入其境、讓讀者們的心情隨之波動，那恭喜你，這是一個很成功的作品。

但在看這個故事時，我無法想像出一個完整的畫面，至於這點我可以建議你人物的表情、動作、情緒可以描繪得更加生動，描述狀況時也可以增加生動感。這樣可以使讀者的體會印象深刻，對你的故事更加深刻。

另外，希望故事可以分出更多段，這樣閱讀時比較不會那麼辛苦。

以上是我小小的建議，若上述中有叫傷人的話請不要太過於在意。

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