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第四屆 宋詞挑戰 自然寫景
ENTRY #5
Author: 簡潔
Published:
Feb 5, 2019
第四屆 宋詞挑戰 自然寫景
Published:
Feb 5, 2019
ENTRY #5
<<清平樂 • 雨澡>>
Author: 簡潔
Published:
Feb 5, 2019
1 Min Read
118 Words
No Plagiarism!CVPZ9BqxsjmFayooFiZPposted on PＥNAＮＡ
點彈綠柳  卧逗花魁秀
落跳滑垂流自有  如舞若飄似奏
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漱芳潔草抒愁  滌煩洗亂忘憂
沐髮沾身漸冷  淚隨雨去凝溝

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上部首兩句分別形容雨水彈在柳葉上，卧在花瓣上的静態。後兩句形容雨落的各種動態和形象。

下部寄情於以雨水沐浴身心，淚水隨雨而流。

最重要平仄不要錯喔。。。保佑保佑(合十) 

553Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeUXwhLfkP8

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