/story/42821/古風回文句-詩-詞小挑戰-第1屆/issue/3
古風回文句/詩/詞小挑戰(第1屆) - 爛範例3<<如夢令. 街巷>> | Penana
arrow_back
古風回文句/詩/詞小挑戰(第1屆)
more_vert
  • info_outline Info
  • toc Table of Contents
  • share Share
  • format_color_text Display Settings
  • exposure_plus_1 Recommend
  • coins Sponsor
  • report_problem Report
  • account_circle Login
share bookmark_border
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
comment 0
exposure_plus_1
coins
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
古風回文句/詩/詞小挑戰(第1屆)
ENTRY #3
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Jan 4, 2019
古風回文句/詩/詞小挑戰(第1屆)
Published:
Jan 4, 2019
ENTRY #3
爛範例3<<如夢令. 街巷>>
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Jan 4, 2019
1 Min Read
200 Words
No Plagiarism!3lSLDP4o3n8ueDKW7UX3posted on PＥNAＮＡ

濃夢醉舟雨岸

風擺飛花柳望

眸淚痛吹寒

籠霧煙雲暾蕩

空巷 空巷

共酒憶回船晃

(回文形式: 倒看)

晃船回憶酒共

巷空 巷空

蕩暾雲煙霧籠

寒吹痛淚眸

望柳花飛擺風

岸雨舟醉夢濃

*

(解釋)

寫得差別見怪…

直看:濃夢中似醉了搖不停的舟渡雨中岸, 風擺動飛花柳在旁望, 眼淚痛吹來寒, 籠罩的霧如煙的雲伴隨餘光搖蕩, 終是空無人之巷, 共酒憶起來時舟的晃動

倒看: 晃船中回憶與酒相共時, 巷無人, 瓢蕩的日光, 雲煙如霧籠罩, 寒風吹痛了淚眼, 望柳與花飛擺著風, 岸下雨, 舟醉如在夢中

寫得差還請見諒!799Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ4KWKyZRgH

216.73.216.134

ns216.73.216.134da2
Comments
BOOKMARK
+RECOMMEND
LIKES 1
READS 795
BOOKMARKS 2
Sponsor
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to comment or bookmark!
< Prev Issue
Next Issue >
Click to load the next chapter
零兒
X
X
Login first to show your name as a sponsor.

Pena Coins Credit Card

×
古風回文句/詩/詞小挑戰(第1屆)
Other
Creator's Pick
✪ Submission Closed
Contest Holder:
霧飄山亭
Challengers:
簡潔
零兒
暮厮
凝漠雪
No tags yet.
Report this story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.