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藏芳集
ISSUE #11
Author: 零兒
藏芳集
Author: 零兒
ISSUE #11
浪淘沙《楓梅相應》
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赤雪染涼天  梅伴楓連

掌紅點綴印秋言 翩白枝眠冬綻現

盡是寒年

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白血綴寒天  楓墜梅連

雪華翩落訴冬言 狂赤前時秋月現

愈似豐年

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以秋楓冬梅為雙主角，刻意敘寫，首次如此冒險。上下闋韻字完全相同，以表上楓下梅之完美應和，上闋赤雪即為以楓為主、梅為輔之用詞，下闋則反之為白血。雖然如此，但因過於反覆，仔細看過便覺有些無味。

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藏芳集
Poetry
Last updated: Sep 6, 2021
Total word count: 4,473
Total reading time: 15 Minutes
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