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當夜晚來臨
ENTRY #2
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Dec 31, 2018
當夜晚來臨
Published:
Dec 31, 2018
ENTRY #2
夜裏登樓
Author: 霧飄山亭
Published:
Dec 31, 2018
1 Min Read
202 Words
No Plagiarism!SMIhkr6DqLN3slDJoi0Dposted on PＥNAＮＡ 銀河低畫夜殘收

雙鶴作橋頭

獨上高樓

細風依舊

誰摘夜烑球

倚欄伴酌花月袖

街巷熽燈猶

又是舊愁

露咽入口

只想再停留

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個人覺得寫得不是太好…但還是寫了，也希望別人喜歡XD也還請見諒…

這是用詞牌《少年遊》填的詞，不知這是否符合挑戰要求XD

怕寫得差看不懂，還是解釋吧:

夜半銀河灑落夜收畫一切，如鶴橋的銀河太美故想獨上高樓，樓上細風依舊，誰會敢摘去夜中的星星呢？倚欄伴酌，花月映入酒中，樓下街巷猶通明，又想起舊愁，酒似清露咽入口，尚能暫解愁，夜半，現在只想停留在此時此景

216.73.216.82

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