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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16418Please respect copyright.PENANAy35FlzOrAE
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 418Please respect copyright.PENANAbZdStgPLmD
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.418Please respect copyright.PENANA4kTHwvzwmI
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.418Please respect copyright.PENANAXfkP27S4dh
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!418Please respect copyright.PENANAvz8ZBZ48rd
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!418Please respect copyright.PENANAd5yLd9511Q
Well done, Zak!
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