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M. Williams
Dec 17, 2018 14:16605Please respect copyright.PENANAPOF4E869yt
I love horror and thriller stories, but the short story "The Christmas Incident" by Zak is a favourite. 605Please respect copyright.PENANA9NkWbgqI0X
Firstly, I was honoured to be requested as the Beta Reader for this story and would like to thank Zak for giving me the chance.605Please respect copyright.PENANAIvBknRhs0s
Secondly, the story hooks you in straight away, and you immediately feel sorry for the family because of what's happening to their son. I also felt fear for the family when reading about their son.605Please respect copyright.PENANA68j5SYPxUa
He builds the suspense beautifully and makes you want to read the next part to check up on the family. Then BAM out of nowhere Zak has added in a twist that changes everything! It was crazy, but masterfully done!605Please respect copyright.PENANA5ghqaeeBWV
It is well worth the read, so pop on over to his page and take a look! You won't be disappointed!605Please respect copyright.PENANAfowXHwBm9O
Well done, Zak!
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